Chapter Eleven and a Half
By Anne B. Walsh
I will admit, I had no idea who you were talking about at first, but you brought the story to a head, and it's a real good story. Are you going to go on with it, or is it part of the Dangerverse? Sorry, I haven't really been following it, but I have read at least the first story.
Lovely story, It's really nice to see Frank and Alice at this point in time. This was a very enjoyable story thanks for sharing it with us.
It took me until the word Frank to realise which chapter you were referring to. I love the way you slowly told them everything. You write the characters really well. Great oneshot.
What a wonderful story. Nice to see an expansion on something you didn't really explore enough in the main dangerverse arc.
I liked how the character of Alice was so meticulous in working it out, really had the reader in suspense as to who the story was about at first.
Monkey
What a wonderful awakening. Neville will be ecstactic about being able to talk to his parents after all these years. What a wonderful gift for all of them. Thanks for writing. This is great. pms
Nice. Cool to see Alice and Frank's pov. I'm not sure I'm really able to understand what it would be like, waking up after 12 years in madness...
Thanks!
Very nice "The sleepers wake" chapter. It will be interesting to see how Frank and Alice adjust to the new world they find.
Aw-w-w-w-w! Very nice.
Awww, this was fantastic! Thanks so much :D ***big hugs***
Nicely put.
Why wasn't this in the story itself? It would have flowed just fine.