Maybe
By Anne B. Walsh
Your stories have the oddest knack of finding me when I'm in a not so great mood, echoing that mood, and then dragging me kicking and screaming from that mood.
Thanks.
YAY! I love this story... I didn't ever notice it on fanfiction.net. But it's good-really good. I love the pack's reactions when they look at what happened in the "Book" reality.
Hmm, this and the last couple chapters do give rise to a thought, what if in trying to send the Pack to an alternate universe, and getting sent himself, Crucio runs afoul of an agency policing the
multiverse and travel between universes? I can just see them coming for his boss, Cornelius Fudge.
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The atrium of the Ministry of Magic rang as two strangely-garbed beings appeared in it. Dressed alike and sporting gleaming gold badges, one was clearly a human male, the other, while clearly male,
appeared more like a cat complete with active tail than human. Together they turned and stalked, nothing else accurately describes their gait, up to the entrance desk.
"Wands, please," quailed the guard.
"Wands? We've no need of such primitive toys. Now, how do we get to see your minister? We're on a case and we don't have all day," growled the feline.
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I can see Cornelius Fudge finding out there are worse places to be than imprisioned by the Ministry.
Why haven't I read this yet? I have no idea why. It was great Anne! The end made me all warm inside :). I love your happy endings. I'm still smiling, just thinking about the story! It was amazing!
I can't wait for your next update, whichever story it may be!
*Megan*
That was amazing! I never thought an AU of an AU would work, but you do it. Please keep the stories coming.
YAY!!!
that is all....
now i really need to go finish my project...
“Hocus pocus, meepy beepy, you are getting very sleepy...” loves it!
I LOVE the explanation of the other universe and what could have been and i also like you explanation of why Danger didnt exist in cannon world....it ties things up very nicely...
“All things considered, this really may be the best of all possible worlds...” loving the Candide quote....except that its actually true in this context...kinda...
Alright, i'll admit it....i was actually holding my breath at the end of this chapter....
Holy Crap!!!! (excuse my french) somehow this story has completely slipped by me and i have never read it......dang this is an intense first chapter....and so sad...so i take it the adults still have all their memories??? its 4:30 in the morning and i have a power point presentation on resin due at 11:30 and 4 resin castings due at one and physics to finish but what am i doing instead...speaking to our english contingant on group and reading fanfiction.....if i fail this semester, im blaming you Anne.....well not really.....but yes....
Damn, you are good. I clicked on the link for this story as a lark. The next thing I knew it was a hour and a half later, and I was wanting more.
Thanks for the enjoyable read,
Sam
A lot of action and a very good story line. Nice AU look at 'Harry Potter' universe also.
Deianara Nott is Theodore's grandmother, right? Or paternal aunt? Because she can't be his mother, JKR said on her website that Theodore was raised by "an elderly widower and Death Eater father", so Theodore's mother presumably died when Theodore was maybe two.
Canon-obsessed much? The point of an Alternate Universe is that things are different... Yes, I admit, I'm not as up on my little details as I should be. But most of the things you've been pointing out were revealed to us after I wrote these stories, and I don't really feel like altering them. Thank you nonetheless for keeping me on my toes.
Very good. A nice side trail along the way. I will look at the other AU's later. Thank you for writing.
pms
Very good. I really like the conclusion Remus makes at the end. I really don't want to find out there are really parrallel worlds. One is enough for me. Thank you for writing. Now I want to read
the epilog.
pms
Yeah! Harry remembers and Andromeda won't have to come to Hogwarts to clear his mind. Great solution to the Curcio problem. He was one ugly git! To use the vernacular! Looking forward to the next
chapter. Thanks for writing.
pms
Ok. Cliffe! At least I know the next chapter is there! I like complete stories better for that reason! I don't like to wait. The day I finished book six (or i should say morning.) I called my
daughter, (it was 1 a.m.) and said I want book 7 NOW!! She laughed but agreed! I figured they couldn't all get home without a problem on the way. I'm going to the next chapter now! Thanks for
writing.
pms
Good. Now all the pack parents and cubs still outside Hogwarts are together. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing.
pms
Very good. I'm glad Neville thought to protect Meghan. I'm also glad Mrs. Longbottom got to see Sirius protecting his daughter. Very well done. Thank you for writing.
pms
Ok, so I resisted reading this story as I knew you were going to torment the Pack for a while, and I prefer it when you don't do that...But, happy endings for all who deserve them, so you are forgiven. Another great DV AU as usual. Glad to see that Fudge and Curcio don't get off as lightly as they (sort of) did in the main Dangerverse, as the latter in particular is a nasty piece of work!