Roman a Clef

Wah!!!! Just as it was getting to the good part! On a serious note I loved seeing your characters in a setting that has a stupid king, bad people, and no magic. And you always do such an amazing job with the plot twists.

Sorry. It's not forgotten, honest it's not, but it just keeps getting put off...

I know I've probably said this already, but more, please? I love this one so very much!

Thought I would leave a longer review, as I have just re-read this (again)...And now we find the Longbottoms - or Portops I suppose. I'm sure the Pride have come up with a lovely cunning plan to free them. I like the idea of cruciatus-caused madness being slavery in this version of the Dangerverse. I think I have all the characters figured out, although I may have mixed up Angelina, Alicia and Katie...The only one I'm not sure of is Katherine Stone - care to cast any light on that? This last cliffie reeks strongly of a certain part of LwD - does John/Remus only have to call to get Morta/Danger back?? Update soon, pretty pretty please...Failing that, more Facing Danger would also be appreciated!
P.S I have left this review on ff.net as well, in case you thought it looked similar...

This is a very good twist on the Dangerverse. I hope you haven't given up on it entirely as I'd like to see where it will go next.

Please update!

I will say I love it, and how it all fits with the Dangerverse. Please, please update!

[Quote] "Do not leave me,” he begged in a whisper barely louder than the hushed voices in the next room. “My Morta, do not leave me here all alone...”

Morta’s breath seemed, for an instant, to catch. Then a whisper so soft that his seemed a shout reached his ear.

“Why?”

John stared at his beloved, frozen in astonishment, and could not speak a word. [End quote]

"Because I love you, you silly twit, that's why. Now get back here so I can hug you and shake you and tell you never to leave me again!" mutters me.

LOL at the way that Samuel talked to the messenger and Alison stood for it. Nice use of the Latin for left in Sinister too. I also liked his extremely dodgy character that is shot through with certain aspects of morality. The Mellis castle was a good name for Hogwarts too. Great chapter. More please.

Hmm, reviews stimulate the mind? let's see, i love it for one. it was kind of funny in the beginning, trying to figure out who everyone was. it ends so depressingly, and now i'm really sad. and it always takes you forever to update...

-sigh-

i fear i shall never know what happens to dear Morta and John before i am bombarded with yet more and more homework. while i adore math, i hate geometry.

-sigh-

anyhow, i love your stories. i used to constantly send my best friend excerpts from your stories, and eventually she told me to stop spoiling it for her and to just giver her the link.

heh heh.

anyhow, love it.

~Mischief

UPDATE! YAY!

Thank-you so much! YOU CAN'T KNOW HOW HAPPY I AM THAT YOU UPDATED THIS STORY!

I'm going all capslock I'm so happy.

Now I want another update, purleeeeeeeeese.

Oh, no! PLEASE tell me she's not really dead!!! You call this fun? eek!!!

The beginning fight was good. She can't be dead. Great chapter. More please. Evil cliffie ending!

I really like this... It's as if it's a new story, but with enough Harry Potter to be called fanfic. And I like how you have portrayed the characters.

That's a truly evil cliffhanger. Excellent chapters though. I love Sirius's story. More please. Love the inclusion of the songs and the incredibly sharp characterisation.

I loved the Marauder crew song. That would be really funny. The King Linus' ugly mistress song will undoubtedly go down with Alison even worse than that one. Excellent chapter.

So I've just read this for the first time and now i know why everyone on group was so hopeful that you would update this....i LOVE it!!!! im afriad you are going to have one more person bugging you about updates...lol...well for this one and LS&SR... The pack and pride lend themselves so easily to this genere and era....I also loved how it was almost a game for myself to figure out who everyone's counterparts were....i think i have all of them except for three....

Certes, 'tis a most pleasant and entertaining morsel to drop before your readers this day. Pray, continue with all dispacth.

Nice to see a new chapter to this one! Is there a who's who listing anywhere? I think I have them all figured out, but it would be nice to be sure.

I still don't know what a damosel is. You sure that O's supposed to be there?

Yes, I'm sure.  It's just an old form of "damsel."