MercuryBlue posted a comment on Thursday 8th June 2006 5:38am for Chapter 2: Royalty

Response to the review by Meteoricshipyards:

Draco didn't slip out of the vow, did he, Anne? He just made sure it was phrased in such a way that it didn't affect him, didn't he, Anne? The jinx would hit anyone who joined the White Wizard--well, Draco isn't about to join the White Wizard, is he, Anne? Because he already did join the White Wizard, and he made sure the jinx wasn't set up to hit anyone who had already joined the White Wizard, didn't he, Anne?

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Breathe into a paper bag... slowly now, in and out... I'm going to need to start being a little trickier with you around, aren't I?  

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 3:48am for Chapter 2: Royalty

There's two G's in Diggory when it's Cedric's last name, but there's only supposed to be one G in Digory when it's Professor Kirke's first name.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 7:15am for Chapter 2: Royalty

This is very good. Of course Malfoy always thinks he is right when of course he is wrong.
And there has to be a bad guy and he deffinitely
fits the bill! I really like Meghan and I know Harry and Hermione do. I am looking forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Fate posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 6:46am for Chapter 2: Royalty

Wonderful chapter!!!

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 1:38am for Chapter 2: Royalty

I love what you're doing with the story.

Hmm, somehow Draco has already gotten around the jinx and vow he made. I wonder how.

I loved Harry trying to avoid being a hero in a new world; and his (and Hermione's) self doubts about being rulers.

Very good. Thank you for writing this.

Tom A.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Draco getting out of the vow will eventually come up in the story.   May take a while, but I'll get to it.  

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Thursday 18th May 2006 4:31pm for Chapter 2: Royalty

Good chapter. I'm upset about Draco, but I'm hoping he comes to like Edmund did. Cheers.

Mouse posted a comment on Thursday 18th May 2006 4:05pm for Chapter 2: Royalty

This is a very good and interesting chapter. I can't wait for the next update.