Vivens cum Pericula
Chapter 1: Arrival
By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Michelline posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 11:47pm for Chapter 1: Arrival
Sad... Sad.. Tinged with just a touch of hope. This is a beautiful piece of work.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 10:34am for Chapter 1: Arrival
Quite an odd little story, I appreciate the difficulty in trying to see just how lightly you can tread on the Universes and arrive at a satisfactory outcome. Nicely done so far. I would appreciate links to the relevant chapters at the bottom however; I for one, have so many stories by different authors going that it can be difficult to keep them all straight without some small reminders. I did not realize that this was Danger after she was accepted among the founders until the last few paragraphs.
Thanks for your very hard work.
Malaskor posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 2:04am for Chapter 1: Arrival
A very interesting beginning, I wonder how this Draco will be like by the time he goes to Hogwarts (and how the adult Malfoys react to what Danger Mk.2 aka Pericula is doing/how she influnences Draco).
Sim posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 1:55am for Chapter 1: Arrival
I like this.
I'm hooked in and wanting more chapters.
I'm also a bit of a sucker for playing 'What If?'
I like your writing style, you add depth with the little details, without letting them bog the story down.
Musta posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 8:50pm for Chapter 1: Arrival
I like the direction of this, but I want to throw a tantrum because I HAD STARTED WRITING SOMETHING SIMILAR! Really I did. Anyway you're better at it than I am so...
Anne B. Walsh replied:
You did? Cool! Well, I'll back off if you want to keep going... or there might be room for two. Let me know.
Quizer posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 7:56pm for Chapter 1: Arrival
Good stuff. Do continue this. As long as you keep writing at all, I don't particularly care which story.
You still write too mysteriously for me to understand everything, though. The only thing I got is that she dispelled Voldemort's spirit by destroying the Horcruxes. The rest is too obscure for my tiny brain... ;)
But I'm sure we will find out in time, eh?
Quizer
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 7:04pm for Chapter 1: Arrival
Ohh, that's got obivous tie-ins with your main series, but this story is one heck of a teaser to use in starting another series.
More, please?
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 6:06pm for Chapter 1: Arrival
Hmmmmm... Very interesting.
Well, I for one, will need to see more of it before I'll be able to decide if I want to see more of it, if that makes any sense. :-)
From here you could take it in completely new directions, or guide it back to something very much like mainline Dangerverse. While you understand the obligatory vagueness, I don't yet, so it's hard to say which it will be. Right now, I'm getting vibes of Mary Poppins meets Granny Weatherwax from it.
All in all, yes, I think I'd like to see more of it. How 'redundant' will it be? Too early to tell. So far it's looking a lot different to me.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 11:56am for Chapter 1: Arrival