LynnTerald posted a comment on Friday 13th November 2009 6:00am

This is a really good story thus far. I'd e interested in seeing it carry on after "Be Careful" and the fourth of Dangerverse is finished.

AnnaTigg posted a comment on Friday 28th March 2008 6:24am

This is intriguing - I hope you haven't abandoned it...

NickyFox13 posted a comment on Friday 5th October 2007 3:33pm

Amazing chapter, and I love how you included both Meghan and Ray in the canon crossover.

I love the idea you are using so far.

Good luck on your original novel, as well as NaNoWriMo.

Try and post an update to spare these poor readers, okay?

callie posted a comment on Friday 5th October 2007 1:46pm

is gray's mum danger?

darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 4th October 2007 7:42pm

"Simple deduction," Gray said airily. "Anyone shaped like a lamppost is always hungry, and a lamppost topped with a ginger mog is hungrier than most."

*snicker* Like this so far.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 4th October 2007 7:26pm

I really like the way they call Ray and Meghan by their surnames. I'm so intrigued by this. More please. Excellent chapter. I love the way they're all so on edge and the usual three are so out of their depth compared to the Dangerverse two.

coaran posted a comment on Thursday 4th October 2007 2:31pm

You're working on an original novel? Good luck with it! Great chapter, by the way, though there's one bit where Harry says (okay, thinks) that he's not sure if Polyjuice can be used cross-genders, but Hermione and Fleur both turned into him near the beginning of DH.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Thanks for catching that. All fixed.

Kathleen posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 3:45pm

wow, this is great! C'mon, don't end it here, I gotta know...how could you cut us off before they answer any questions...please please please keep writing. and posting! posting is good. posting is very important.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 6:07am

Wow! Was that ever good! I can't wait for more.

I'm curious as to whether Gray is Draco from pure dangerverse or more a "Ray" like character from some of the AU dangerverse stories. I liked how he has his animagus form although I do think that they've come from another dimension.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

callie posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 7:11pm

this sounds cool

Michelline posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 4:17am

I like this so far. The juxtaposition of the two worlds is a very interesting idea. I'm looking forward to more. Especially on how it happened.

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 12:54am

I'm kinda interested to see where you go with this. I imagine it'll end up a bit differently than DH. It certainly looks good so far. Thanks for writing!

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Sunday 16th September 2007 8:33pm

Oooh, I love this already. The scene between Umbridge and the kids was great. Harry is going to be so confused by this. I do wonder why they are in this new world though. I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter though, so more please! Good beginning.

Saffron posted a comment on Sunday 16th September 2007 12:40am

Interesting, interesting...I'm really curious about what happened to Draco and Meghan and how they've suddenly come to the canon verse. I'm definitely going to be keeping an eye on this one.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 8:25pm

Fox and Meghan crossed over. Pretty Cool. Are there going to be more chapter maybe explaining how they got there?

Tabitha Potter posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 5:51pm

LOL, Is it okay that I'm very confused. I understand... but I don't. Oh gosh, I think I'll just give up now. Its a promising start, albiet a bit confusing.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 3:34pm

Hmm, sounds like a party or parties slipped across the boundaries between a couple worlds. This is quite the interesting start and I do hope you take it farther as your muse moves you.

Fishburne posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 2:40pm

I can answer that AN:

Cause you love to write.

:)

And we love to read.

Fish

John Davis posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 2:38pm

please post more quickly. I look forward to reading more of this story

coaran posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 1:01pm

Another story! *squee* Oh, just one comment: you referred to Grimmauld Place as Privet Drive right at they spot where the group Apparates there.