Cross the Line

This is a really good story thus far. I'd e interested in seeing it carry on after "Be Careful" and the fourth of Dangerverse is finished.

This is intriguing - I hope you haven't abandoned it...

Amazing chapter, and I love how you included both Meghan and Ray in the canon crossover.

I love the idea you are using so far.

Good luck on your original novel, as well as NaNoWriMo.

Try and post an update to spare these poor readers, okay?

is gray's mum danger?

“Simple deduction,” Gray said airily. “Anyone shaped like a lamppost is always hungry, and a lamppost topped with a ginger mog is hungrier than most.”

*snicker* Like this so far.

I really like the way they call Ray and Meghan by their surnames. I'm so intrigued by this. More please. Excellent chapter. I love the way they're all so on edge and the usual three are so out of their depth compared to the Dangerverse two.

You're working on an original novel? Good luck with it! Great chapter, by the way, though there's one bit where Harry says (okay, thinks) that he's not sure if Polyjuice can be used cross-genders, but Hermione and Fleur both turned into him near the beginning of DH.

Thanks for catching that. All fixed.

wow, this is great! C'mon, don't end it here, I gotta know...how could you cut us off before they answer any questions...please please please keep writing. and posting! posting is good. posting is very important.

Wow! Was that ever good! I can't wait for more.

I'm curious as to whether Gray is Draco from pure dangerverse or more a "Ray" like character from some of the AU dangerverse stories. I liked how he has his animagus form although I do think that they've come from another dimension.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

this sounds cool

I like this so far. The juxtaposition of the two worlds is a very interesting idea. I'm looking forward to more. Especially on how it happened.

I'm kinda interested to see where you go with this. I imagine it'll end up a bit differently than DH. It certainly looks good so far. Thanks for writing!

Oooh, I love this already. The scene between Umbridge and the kids was great. Harry is going to be so confused by this. I do wonder why they are in this new world though. I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter though, so more please! Good beginning.

Interesting, interesting...I'm really curious about what happened to Draco and Meghan and how they've suddenly come to the canon verse. I'm definitely going to be keeping an eye on this one.

Fox and Meghan crossed over. Pretty Cool. Are there going to be more chapter maybe explaining how they got there?

LOL, Is it okay that I'm very confused. I understand... but I don't. Oh gosh, I think I'll just give up now. Its a promising start, albiet a bit confusing.

Hmm, sounds like a party or parties slipped across the boundaries between a couple worlds. This is quite the interesting start and I do hope you take it farther as your muse moves you.

I can answer that AN:

Cause you love to write.

:)

And we love to read.

Fish

please post more quickly. I look forward to reading more of this story

Another story! *squee* Oh, just one comment: you referred to Grimmauld Place as Privet Drive right at they spot where the group Apparates there.