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shanntarra posted a comment on Monday 3rd August 2009 4:42am for 78: How You Attack

I didn't understand the statement in this one about "He did it because I asked him to." I had to go back 3 chapers to find that he said said "Please not her hand, it will kill her." Or something along those lines. To be honest I don't think enough clues have been left if you are going for alot of fore shadowing. It sometimes feels like there are little bits missing that are important. That the author knows and expects the reader to know but the author never told them that.
Other wise good story. I hope for more.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

I'm sorry that you feel lost in the story. I try to make my clues subtle, since most of my readers like trying to guess where the story is going and being surprised at the parts they couldn't figure out. All will be made clear at the end, so if you're getting frustrated you might want to wait until a few more chapters have been posted.

Ladyofthelight posted a comment on Sunday 2nd August 2009 8:58am for 78: How You Attack

It is indeed being pieced together now! That was an impressive display of magic that Draco did! Great chap, update Dangerverse and BC soon!
~LotL

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Yeah, well, he may not be so happy with it after he finds out the consequences...

HGRHfan35 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd August 2009 4:12am for 78: How You Attack

Oh don't you worry, I'm not going anywhere and I'm staying tuned.

This is so exciting! *squueee*

Anne B. Walsh replied:

That might not be the word you use after next chapter. Just a warning.

BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Saturday 1st August 2009 11:56pm for 78: How You Attack

That was brilliant as always^^
I can't wait for the next chapter - your little description above sounded more than just promissing...

Anne B. Walsh replied:

If you're not worried, you should be.

callie posted a comment on Saturday 1st August 2009 11:50pm for 78: How You Attack

i think ive got everything...

hehe id forgotten about the suicidal house

hmmmm... i wonder what drao's unpleasant surprise is...

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Well, if I told you, then it wouldn't be a surprise now would it?

Cassie Selbo posted a comment on Saturday 1st August 2009 3:44pm for 78: How You Attack

Love the story thus far but thank goodness you're doing a recap because I can't figure out how this played out!

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Just remember, no matter what Draco said, he's firmly on the side of good these days. He intended most of this to happen--a few things he didn't, but mostly it went the way he thought it would.

carolebear posted a comment on Saturday 1st August 2009 3:21pm for 78: How You Attack

Wonderful as always. Of course, as always, you leave us with more questions. I am loving the frequent updates, though. And NArcissa think that Lucius might be Hermoine's father? Too rich!

Anne B. Walsh replied:

She's got no other way to explain it--what's she going to believe, that her perfect little angel of a son did it?