Elenna123 posted a comment on Saturday 25th May 2013 11:55am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

I didn't see the songfic mentioned above on this site...

CodeRomance posted a comment on Monday 28th January 2008 5:13am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

WHAT! ok tonks is funny! great chapter!

CodeRomance

Phil Boswell posted a comment on Wednesday 12th September 2007 1:33am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

I think one of the things I love about these stories is that scenes which might in other context be dismissed as "fluff", such as "Draco & Luna sitting in a tree" [smirk], are demonstrably nothing of the sort: they are vital character-building elements and as such work perfectly.

I looked for that "super-long songfic", but couldn't find it: am I looking in the wrong places?

Scott Sharrad posted a comment on Sunday 8th July 2007 2:25am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

Ah yes, I remember the line now. I have (and the shows I've been in) have referred to that as simply the 'Prologue' which is how it is also listed in my few recordings in the sleeve notes.

regards,
Scott

Scott Sharrad posted a comment on Saturday 7th July 2007 10:40pm for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

I'm not normally one to nit pick (especially when this chapter has been up for so long!) but.... :P you've got quite a few errors with regards to Joseph with regards to the characters that sing songs and even the song titles.

First off the ranks, Ron, you have him singing 'ONe More Angel In Heaven'. You have stated that his character is Levi, when in the show Ruben sings this song.

Second, I don't know where you get the song 'You Are What You Feel' from, in all the productions I have seen and been in, there is no song with that title, let alone the words.

Third, Fleur singing 'Those Canaan Days'. You have her playing Ruben, when it is actually Simeon.

I also wouldn't call the song 'Potiphar' as a duet between the narrator and Potiphar.

In your author notes, you claim Luna and Draco sing a song together, However, Mrs Potipar (Luna's character) does not even sing in the entire musical unless she sings as part of the female ensemble.

You also have the words that Harry is singing just before the scene falls down wrong.

Sorry to be so picky, but it really jolted me out of the whole story line for those moments.

regards,
Scott

Anne B. Walsh replied:

I think that we are working from different versions of the show. I'm away from home at the moment and can't check on this, but as soon as I get back, I will investigate.

The song "You Are What You Feel" is the title I have for the opening monologue by the Narrator. "If you think it, want it, dream it, then it's real; you are what you feel."

David` posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 6:09pm for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

Operation Changing Dragon-lol Obsessive Compulsive Disorder, Hey I don't only think outside the box, I BLOW IT UP !!! lol

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 10:40pm for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

I love the way you sorted Tonks and Charlie out. Clever. I rather like the musical though question its usefulness as part of the Triwizard Championship. It's good fun.

n4zhg posted a comment on Wednesday 5th July 2006 9:38pm for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

Having never seen the play on stage, I guess there are differences between the movie and the play. From what I saw in the movie, Draco and Luna wouldn't really sing a song together.

Also from the movie, Any Dream Will Do comes between You Are What You Feel and Jacob and Sons.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 8:47am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

good chapter - loved how you were able to expose Crouch as missing and raise Percy a 1/4 step off rock bottom in the same scene.

Any way to examine the cable for spell residue?

Thanks for doing such a good job with all the storylines you are interweaving

warm regards

karina82 posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 8:10am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

oh man this chapter was good. so nagaini was near crouchs house? the LOTR reference was cool, especially when you think about it they way draco did.

question: the voice in harry's head was that his subconscious or was that alex?

Mariposa posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 4:43am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

Yea! Lovely chapter! I loved Draco's musings at the beginning.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 12:27am for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

Ya! The wedding will resume!

amulder posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 8:46pm for Chapter 47: Snakes and Songsters (Year 4)

Love the chapter. Percy's plot is very puzzling, and left hanging. Grrr. So he saw a dead body. But then they find Barty Crouch up in the bedroom. So whose body was it? No one seemed to answer that question yet.

How long does Polyjuice last? Is the new person not really Crouch? If not, then he'll turn back in an hour. I don't think they can make polyjuice from stored parts. If they could, then in Canon there would have been no reason to keep the original Moody alive. (Well, except for the occasional questioning.

good job on talking through the Joseph story.

Poor Harry, though. He's still being quite the idiot about Cho. Bad enough that he still even looks at her, but to still be _wanting_ her when she's clearly with Cedric? uhh, people can be silly.

thanks for sharing
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