By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Amamama posted a comment on Saturday 3rd June 2006 12:33am
Interruptions, interruptions, interruptions... Finally, on the fourth try I managed to read the whole chapter. With a few interruptions... As always, I just loved it. All of it, but the end was a highlight - the silent Trouble-Taking Dance (great idea, btw) past Snape sounds like a sight to behold.
Thanks for sharing!
Graup posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 12:03am
Enjoyed the chapter.
I really liked the changes you made here. And the fortitude of Harry.
So, when are we going to stop pining, and get the couples together? You've already done all but Ron and Harry, and it seems the time is right, now.
Graup posted a comment on Saturday 27th May 2006 11:17pm
Enjoyed the chapter, and the capture of Rita Skeeter.
Did you have the kids register in order to avoid trouble? I might have missed that piece.
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2006 6:10am
Excellent chapter. Just enough different to make it really interesting. I am curious to find out if they invalidate this task or give points like they did in cannon! The ball is in your court! Thanks for writing. pms
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 2:31pm
Great chapter. I love how much stronger and better prepared Harry is in this fic than in canon, poor kid. Just goes to show that with a different environment, things come out differently for kids, eh?
ghanima posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 10:52am
evil, evil, horrible cliffy!!!
the rest made ofr an excelent chapter
ghani
Ken Warner posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 9:38am
You have drawn us into so many unfamiliar directions of late - it is nice to get back on the shaky ground of Living with Danger - loved your rendition of this task - nice to see Harry prepared and capable instead of fumbling and just lucky.
great chapter in a great story
Thanks
Mariposa posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 6:10am
"he looked angry enough to chew wands and spit out spells"
OMG LOL! This was one of the best lines I've ever read! And I loved Harry helping Ginny with her spell, of course its sweet that they each had a part in the other's. Great chapter! I eagerly wait to see what the decision will be and what was the pack's deal with Rita?
Mariposa posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 5:26am
Congrats on your graduation! Great chappie btw! I loved the whole thing with Neville and Pearl! And Harry and the Slytherins! Off to the next chapter!
Rocky235 posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 1:24am
Perfect. Well, except for the cliffie. You know, we'll come back even if we don't have one foot over the cliff.
Ron waking up was quite the shock.
Last Christmas I was given a pair of gloves that was lined with that fish fur. At least they smelled as if they were.
Malaskor posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 9:50pm
Great part, but it doesn't satisfy the cravings, in fact it has driven them to new heights!
:D
Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing
freakyfinger posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 6:26pm
Well now, THERE's a twist!
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 3:31pm
Some very nice touches here and, of course, it just whets the appetite for the next chapter. I like Ginny's spell and it'll be interesting to see how long it'll take this Harry to recognize what's right there in front of him.
karina82 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 2:26pm
it's good to see the pack adults dealing with the bug problem. happy to see the second task but wonder if who's behind rons almost drowing.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 1:46pm
Sabotaged! I love it! Of course, the first thing my mind flipped to was Kim Cattrall in Star Trek VI, telling everyone the origins of the word. Ok, enough about that. This was great, as usual. I am really looking forward to more, more, more. It's almost as good as chocolate - well, almost....
Mayjest posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 9:29am
Ooo, sabotaged. Certainly interesting. Thats probably a worse cliffie than almost dying or something like that. I hate cliffies.
Amamama posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:10am
At least Harry's support system is waaay better here than in canon. Thank goodness, but I suspect Ron is going to spend a few weeks being envious and not talking to him anyway...
Thanks for sharing!
Amamama posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:11am
Crouch!Moody has a rather special sense of humour, me thinks. I loved that Draco just threw it off, easy as anything.
Thanks for sharing!
Amamama posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:42am
Good - at least Ron gets decent dress robes, even if he doesn't know it yet. And will Harry make a fool of himself trying to ask Cho? Will he still be a champion?? Look forward to find out...
Thanks for sharing!
Amamama posted a comment on Saturday 3rd June 2006 1:08am