Lira posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 6:43pm

Interesting chapter. I'm sorry to hear, though, that you intend to work on something else in between this story and the sequel. Hope you won't take too much time with them. ;)

karina82 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 4:10pm

man i so wanted for someone to beat the crap out of fudge. it's good that harry was able to opened up.

zac posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 4:04pm

this is a beautiful story. thank you

Bethany posted a comment on Wednesday 19th July 2006 4:51pm

Once again an amazing chapter. I love what you did with Danger and Karkaroff, showing her humanity in wanting revenge, bringing her to her senses via DD and then he dies in the end b/c he tries to kill Danger. It is very satisfying as a reader when the bad guy gets it.
Very exciting grave yard scenes, I love that Harry used his fire power and I almost jumped up and yelled when wolf killed that blasted snake!! I've wanted to see Nagini die since I first read GOF.
Excellent chapter, I can't wait to read more. Thank you

zac posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 11:24am

ahhh...poor cedric...a hufflepuff to the last

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 7:24am

Great chapter I thought that you were going to let Cedric live, but oh well. You should have Ginny hug and kiss Harry as soon as she can get her arms around him. It will deffently get his mind off of Cho, and get his mind on Ginny. Update soon.

MPF

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 4:58am

Very well thought out. Subtley different and nice use of Harry's Gryffindor powers. Not making him to powerful with the, thats good.
It was obvious what killed Luna's mother but I liked the way you tied it all in and confirmed it. Shows how many little plot ideas you have woven together so well.

Monkey

Serendipity posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 7:56am

Wow. For a while there, I was terrified that you'd actually kill Danger - glad you didn't. It was interesting the way you made the graveyard scene come about and it'll be even more interesting to see how you handle the Order. Looking forward to the next chapter...

Cheers,
~*~LIZ

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 4:55am

Excellent! Absolutely brilliant! Loved Luna's method of getting rid of newt student!!
Like the astral concept!
Not sure who turned the cup into a portkey as crouch wasn't there!
Really liked the insight into Dumbledores thoughts at times.

Monkey

ps - way to many exclamation marks by me, and keep writing

kira posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 1:16am

you cant stop there.. please no.. i need to know what happened.. update soon.. i love the whole series and think it is brillent how u have kept the main plots of book ture but have twisted them to suit ur story and plots.. well done.. :)

Quizer posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 12:07am

See? I knew you wouldn't have any scruples killing him off. That was pretty cruel, giving us hope first and then killing him off anyway. I think I hate you. :( (Being honest I also have to say I hate myself for letting myself be fooled by your Voldemort, like Harry did)

It's kinda depressing how your version of the graveyard scene went so very different, but still ended up with exactly the same results (discounting the death of Nagini). I think you put too much effort into letting things proceed at the same pace as in canon, when your AU clearly has developed a different dynamic. It strains suspension of disbelief. There is no reason for things to turn out the same, yet they do.

I'm still looking forward to the next chapters. Hopefully you won't make Year 5 suck as much as canon-Harry's did. Don't let Umbridge get so much power over Harry this time, I'm convinced it will greatly hurt the quality of this story!

well, see you next update.

Quizer

Mary Morley posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 9:16pm

I think I like that fact that Cedric at least did a bit more than stand there with his mouth agape before he died. It made his death less senseless, if that makes any sense. Poor dumb bastard never knew what hit him in the books.

Lira posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 4:07pm

Wow. Brilliant chapter! *cries for poor Cedric* *hates Voldemort even more now* More soon, please! :)

Chipotle posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 2:13pm

THAT ROCKED!!!! Harry stunned Tommy and came home
I completely laughed in his face (theoritically, of course). by the way, what does Wolf killing Nagini meaning in terms of Horcruxes. When that happened, I was singing "ding dong the snake is dead, the wicked snake, the wicked snake. Tommy is with his snake no more." My mom thought I was loosing my mind (not that I had one to lose in the first place). Oh well I've rambled on long enough. Excellent chapter, I can't wait for the next one.

karina82 posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 1:36pm

wohooo i almos fell out of my chair when i got the notice that the new chapter was up. it was good to see harry use his griffindor power. really cool how those not in the pride could still link up with them and send more power to harry.

still brought a tear to my eyes to see cedric fall.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 10:02am

and so, as our hero is hanging over the cliff, with the stagecoach dangling below, pulling on the roots of the tiny shrub, tune in next week to find out - Is it Wormtail? and will the Pack and Pride be able to thwart the evil designs?

seriously mean there, beloved author; please update this wonderful story soon, before the roots pull out.

warmest regards

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 8:58am

I really like what you are doing with this story!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 2:17am

Heh, nice cliffie touch, there. This is developing quite nicely on it's own while paralleling the main canon events.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2006 7:38am

AHHHH!!!!, a cliffy. Now will you change the story and save Cedric or let him die like the book. I hope you let him live so Harry can get Cho out of his head, and realize the Ginny is the one for him. I guess I will have to wait and see. Maybe in this story Harry can control his dreams and figure out what Moldy is doing and get info to the Headmaster before anything happens. Update soon. Keep up the great writing.

MPF

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2006 4:29am

Did you do an AU about the Lilly and James alive and part of the pack?