This is my first review of your stories but I would like to say they are some of the most enjoyable stories around. I can't wait to see what interesting places you will take us, the readers.
Although I have noticed that it seem that Harry is always making mistakes and everyone is getting up set with him, while the rest of the pack never seem to make mistakes on the same scale. Sure Draco
ran away, and Luna gave up her visions but it never seem to me that they others make the same kind of kid mistakes they are suppose to make at their age. It always seems to be Harry. I bring this up
because it always seem that Harry has to mature after making his mistakes while the rest of the pack is aways ahead of him. Anyways this is just my observation, please keep up the good work can't
wait for the next chapter.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Thanks for pointing that out... I don't always spot my own patterns! Glad you like the stories!
David13 posted a comment on Saturday 20th January 2007 3:59pm for Chapter 10: Trapped (Year 5)
Anne B. Walsh replied: