Facing Danger
Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:46am for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
Heh, both Harry and Draco are having girl problems of different sorts, not that I think either would trade with the other. I suspect this is going to get Harry to re-evaluate his relationship choices and I wish Draco the fortitude to remain strong to his commitment to Luna.
The rescue attempt went better than expected, but "no battle plan survives contact with the enemy", so I imagine things are about to go quite wrong there.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 7:57am for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
Poor Harry, Cho isn't very understanding though perhaps I can see why. Love Meghan's spell. Laughed aloud at Dolores's predicament. That was such a great chapter but such a mean place to leave it! More please. Great stuff.
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 5:28am for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
You are a wicked, wicked, cruel author! Not really, you write such great stories that we can forgive you the odd cliffie.
I thought you would drag out the Harry/Cho stuff for longer, I think its good you didn't though. The subtlety with which you re-introduced Harry's summer thoughts of Ginny really worked and hopefully that will develop as well as everything else you write does!
Thanks for writing, can't wait for more!
Monkey
amulder posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:48am for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
Yes it's good. Yes I wish it wouldn't take so long to update. Yes you are a bad author for giving us a cliff-hanger. No I do not understand this little episode of Draco's. He's never given the time of day to a thought about other girls before.
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frances posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:21am for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
Evil isn't the word! There has to be something stronger than that...
No matter, it was a great chapter and worth waiting for. I must say, all the raging teenage hormones are really getting out of hand. I enjoyed reading it and will wait with bated breath for the next update.
john2 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:18pm for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
All ways a pleasure to slip into your family-friendly world for a new chapter.
When will Harry get a clue?
David13 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 8:12pm for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)
Another interesing chapter I can't wait to see what is next. That being said Harry is still the only one that seems to be making stupid mistakes while everyone else seems to manage just fine to get without making them or at least getting caught. It just doesn't make sense everyone is always getting on Harry's case about things he does wrong but they never have problems? They are teenagers and should all make mistakes from time to time, and just showing Harry's mistakes it makes him seem really stupid compared to all his other family members and friends.
It would be nice and realistic for Harry to talk to someone for being stupid just once then he wouldn't seem like the idiot screwup compared to the rest of the pride.
After all in canon, Ron is a load mouth who says stupid things and same with Draco, also Hermione always thinks she is right even when she is wrong. This makes it seem like they are human and in my opinion your stories just make it seem like Harry is an idiot.
That is not to say I don't like the stories or that I will stop reading just that this one aspect makes the other characters unrealistic.
Deborahsu posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:42pm for Chapter 14: You Should Get Out More (Year 5)