Nenya posted a comment on Monday 9th December 2013 3:06pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Oh gosh, we're well and truly into the Bad Things now...I do love this series, it's so exciting even after so many re-reads!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 12:33pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

I'm glad it wasn't too easy for someone to find Harry. A lot of fics have him disappear but get home too easily. It's more interesting this way. Well done!

PrayingForMercy posted a comment on Tuesday 30th December 2008 12:01am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Ugh, BaDoM. I hated this in canon. I think I skipped half of the pages in boredom...
Lets see... a dispensable part of the Pack+Pride. Draco is going later, Harry is obvious, Weasleys, Luna, Neenie, Meg all stay. Neville could go, I guess?
All the adults can stay too.. Marcus?! Oh god. D:

hahaheeheehaha posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 6:42am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

its enough of a cliffy to make me sit on the edge of my seat. i started reading this ages ago but then i forgot where i was up to so i had to read it all again. i enjoyed it loads! esp cos i forgot half the plot twists so it all seemed new. please update soon! i got so used to there being loads for me to read so now theres nothing left i have nothing to do! thanks for writing it -- it must have taken ages

NickyFox13 posted a comment on Friday 5th October 2007 3:47pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Let's see...I want to apologize for not getting this review in earlier.

The cliffie is evil, but knowing you, the next chapter will be worth the wait.

I can't wait to see how you handle the Battle at the Department of Mysteries. It was intense in [i]OotP[/i] so only time will tell to see how amazingly you will write it.

On the deaths...it's hard to say, seeing as most of the readers are attatched to them. There's Remus who dies, Fred, Mad-Eye, Hedwig...But definately, death may be hard, but it makes good drama to be truthful.

*sheepish grin*

Definately, you should keep Hedwig dead, as well as Mad-Eye, but Remus not so much. I've grown attached to him ever since I started reading the Dangerverse.

Then there's the deal with Tonks having Remus' kid in 'Deathly Hallows'. Maybe Danger could have Remus' kid and Tonks could go off with Charlie? Or you could have that same plotline with Tonks and Charlie?

Oh, I'm not sure, since this is your story.






Last thing: I absolutely love this story. You have created a brilliant series of AU stories with great twists, turns and three dimensional original characters.

Update soon, por favor.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 12th September 2007 5:17am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

You've got to feel so sorry for Harry. You write Winky brilliantly, so many people can't get the hang of House-Elf speech but you do it really well. Eeeek! at that ending. Evil evil cliffhanger but excellent too. What did you do to Mr Weasley? Great stuff. More please.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 11th September 2007 3:44pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Now that's a most excellent cliffie. I liked the way this chapter built it's suspense from start to finish with little "teasers" along the way to keep you reading through it. I wonder if Dolores (yeah, it's a mis-spelling of her first name, but the meaning of the name fits so well) really knows who/what she's dealing with? It'll be amusing if/when she finds out and this reader, bloodthirsty barbarian that I am, would love to see her being one of the ones to die, if she's not dead already - though I'd love to see her and Fudge die of apoplexy when they see that Voldemort is indeed back and their quite little fiction isn't safe any more, if it ever was. I'd rather Mr. Weaseley doesn't die and if his wife is to die, I'd like to see it be doing something really beneficial, like taking out Lucius and/or one or more of the Lestranges. Beyond that, I really don't want any of the Light side to die, but I know that's not realistic. I would ask that none of the Pack nor Pride die; severe wounds are recoverable, death isn't.

Tabitha Potter posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 11:17pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Please please please don't me go through Sirius's death again. I think I may actually break down if you do. save the pack and pride, and Arthur and molly. and I'll be happy. Save the twins if you can :)

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 10:52pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

good chapter but but why not just have fawkes flash him back to hogwarts?

callie posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 6:14pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

that was sooooooooo good
i don't want anyone to die
that would just be too sad
:(

can't wait for the next update

DarQuing posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 1:29pm for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Umm, is nobody dieing an option? *puppy-dog eyes*

Definitely not the Pack or anybody in the Pride.

twilightxpanic posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 10:22am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Ahhhhhhhh! Just ahhhhhhhh! Ahhhh. ahaha ok ok enough of that. It's just soo exciting I cannot wiat for the battle sequence and the rest of the pack and pride to show up and kick some death eater/voldiemoldie assssss. Wooooohoooooooo. Yea!

LoneWolfe posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 10:07am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Oh my. We're really in it now, aren't we. I had a couple of suspicions that Crouch was acting a bit ... off - now I know why! Nice cliffy (again), you're leaving us all on the edge of our seats here.

As far as votes for who should/shouldn't die... all the power is yours. I'd rather be surprised.

Great chapter, as always, and I can't wait for the next chapter (but no pressure, because I'll wait as long as needed)!

sejones posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 8:49am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

NNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Don't kill anyone please! That extreme plead out of my system, please don't kill Sirius or anyone in the Pack or Pride. I could deal with the loss of a Weasley or a professor or two. Another death I could envision producing plenty of angst is that of Aletha and Sirius's unborn child. It would also leave the numbers in the Pack and Pride even (unless you intend the new child to step into the hole that Draco's death will leave, though I sincerely hope that his death will just be a subterfuge to protect him or get a spy into the Death Eaters). I've enjoyed this story and my only wish is that you could update more often, but please don't sacrifice quantity for quality. Sara

ps. Please don't kill Sirius!

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 8:28am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Wow! Barty Crouch Snr must really be Barty Crouch Jnr. So very, very superb. I didn't even guess it at all but I think its difficult to suspect characters when reading a story that is written like Fanfic is.

I'm really quite worried over who your going to kill, but I'm hoping none of the pack or pride because of the wedding scene Danger dreamed all the way back in the first fic.

Great chapter though, can't wait for the next bit.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 8:21am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

How bout a 180 from every other stories I read about the vail? Have Sirius force Bellatrix through it instead of the other way around?

Aberbadger posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 7:08am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

no weaselys, pride or pack, at least 1 de, preferably bella, otherwise upo to you

.x.Ellz.x. posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 5:30am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Loving the story as always but one thing about who dies. YOU CANNOT MAKE ME GO THROUGH SIRIUS DYING AGAIN. PLEASE.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 1:54am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

BaDoM next eh? Multiple Deaths? and We get to vote? I can't imagine the power hehehe lets see who has to die.... Umbridge (I just don't like her) umm not sure who else. I would rather be suprised.


Rob

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 12:35am for Chapter 22: Secrets and Spells (Year 5)

Mean, mean, cliffy! Great chapter though. Things are really moving again. As long as Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny make it you can kill whoever you want. Especially if they're death eaters. Thanks for writing!