Facing Danger
Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 4:44pm for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Definitely more refined. It took me a few seconds to work it out, but the Judas reference is perfect. Too perfect, in fact. I just hope it doesn't happen the same way. I'd like to think Cho is redeemable, and if she goes and hangs herself like he did, then there's no chance for her to be saved. Well done, I liked it a lot.
Blocker posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 4:30pm for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
man, it seems like once every blue moon we get an update. Not that Im complaining mind, its never lacking in content and I'm VERY curious to know about Hestia's "shadow". Very curious indeed. New chapter soon yeah?
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 3:17pm for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Thanks for writing
MPF
Owl posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 6:44am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Exciting stuff! I can't wait for more. I especially like the bit with Ginny's evil twin. And I loved the Cho part.
Prongsie posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 5:15am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Oh boy. Oh boy oh boy oh boy. Things are really getting started, aren't they? At Hogwarts, at the
Den... To be honest, I thought Dumbledore would rreplace Trelawney with Danger, but she DID have some prophecies... Didn't even realize there still was History of Magic :P
I love the Luna/Amanda competition, and the Amanda/Hestia connection, though it isn't quite clear (yet) whether it is a connection or simple a comparison. Maybe Hestia is a someone special, with special talents. Well, I'll find out soon enough anyway :D
Can't wait (or just barely) for the next one!
Thx for writing FD, and the entire Danger-universe,
Prongsie
stargirl404 posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 4:57am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Great chapter! Hope to see an update soon!
Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 4:29am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Leave us hanging next time? This is terrible! Now I'm worrying NOW about the NEXT chapter's cliffhanger, when it hasn't even happened yet!
Good chapter though. Harry and Ginny are great, and I liked how you handled Cho too. I'm looking forward to the next roller coaster!Thanks for writing,
Jay
Jadzia7667 posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 3:37am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Yay for an update, and the scene between Danger and Remus. It's lovely to see their relationship. This is an amazing universe, and I'm so happy to have found it.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
I enjoy writing them very much, so I'm glad you like reading them!
AnnaTigg posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 2:53am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
I wonder which of the Pride and friends were involved in creating that very neat piece of revenge...I think that's even better than "Sneak" in spots. Home to the Den for Christmas then - I hope you plan to update soon because I really want to see where this is going next!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
I really enjoyed coming up with this one. Plus it's something more than what you see...
apuzzle posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 2:16am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Very nice surprise to see a new chapter.. thanks Anne.
Not being Christian,I did not get the reference to the "30 silver coins for treason" until I googled it. You are right, it is more refined but remember you get readers from all over the world - some details may be obscure for us..:)
Anne B. Walsh replied:
JKR's Britain is nominally Christian--there are Biblical quotations on gravestones and so forth--so I figured it wouldn't be completely out of order. For the readers... hey, like you said, that's why God invented Google!
kendiara posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 1:27am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Silly Remus thats almost as bad as saying that's the worst thing that can happen...
Love the necklace oh yeah don't mess with the DA, they will torch your world :)
now if I could just figure out the whole Amanda/Hestia thing...twins maybe...one that never got born...
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Oh, Amanda and Hestia's stories will be told eventually. Don't hold your breath, though. It's going to take a while.
Deborahsu posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 1:09am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Ok, cranking your motor! LOL!!! I do love your stories. I don't always review, and for that I apologize. I'm drawn into the Danger universe so easily that I really have no critique to offer, other than that I don't want to have to wait for the next chapter!
I will, of course, wait as long as it takes, and then greedily devour it when it arrives. :-)
Anne B. Walsh replied:
I don't insist on critique... praise is good too... :-)
kirk4ever posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 1:05am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
that is brilliant - but would Cho have got it?
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Judging by her reaction, she did.
Milarqui posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 1:05am for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Oh, those are her thirty silver coins for treason! I just want to see what everybody else says when they see how her treason to the DA has been paid for! And how exactly did Cho circumvent the charms Hermione did on the list?
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Cho didn't circumvent the charms exactly. She just gave things away so slowly, and in such small pieces, that the charms were never triggered all the way.
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd May 2008 11:48pm for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)
Nice part, and a heck of a way for Cho to be let known about the DA's anger. Also really liked the idea of Luna sort of switching off, and just making the appropriate responses while her mind is working on something else completely different.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Luna seems the type to get that knack.
callie posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 5:20pm for Chapter 29: The Greatest Gift (Arc 6)