graup posted a comment on Friday 22nd September 2006 9:52am for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Enjoyed the short chapter, especially the Norbert part. Thanks for bringing him back.

Serendipity posted a comment on Wednesday 20th September 2006 8:30am for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Eeee!!!! Another wedding! Yay!!!!!!!!

Darkness posted a comment on Wednesday 20th September 2006 2:27am for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Really ingenious, how Ron figured out a way to locate Hagrid. Its really nice to hear from the big guy, in many stories its like he doesn't even exist.

Yay, Harry's finally home and Ginny seems at her rope's end concerning him. Frankly, Harry's mildly tempered considered all the shit going on in his life; if it had been me I'd have been screaming for answers. The guy just has too much on his plate. Even then, I feel for Ginny's plight. The advice Neville gave her sounds good.

On a final note, I'm real glad nothing happened between Sirius and Corona. It wouldn't be fair to Letha.

jason papile1 posted a comment on Tuesday 19th September 2006 12:04pm for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

First time caller, long time listener. I just got through re-reading the entire main Dangerverse stories (LwD, Lw/oD, DwD, and FD). Your's are the only stories I've re-read 3 times. Tim's, John's and a few others I've re-read twice, but your stories are just well plotted and connected even over the many years and stories. Great job and great ideas throughout. As per earlier events in your universe: I like how when Ginny first got her full transformation complete, she and Hermione fought in their forms, and she completely owned Hermione. If you are indeed pairing up H/G (which the earliest prophecy points to) then nice foreshadowing. And second, the nights before the 3rd Task when the entire Pride encounters Voldemort in the Riddle House in Harry's dream, why does Luna clutch her left arm? Is this a hint? Especially with her revelation in chapter 3 of FD. If this is information discussed elsewhere, point me to it so I can join in. And keep up the good work with whatever you write next, I will read it for sure.
Jay

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 19th September 2006 1:46am for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Please keep on writing whatever you jolly well please - most everything seems to tie together in the end anyway.

Nice chapter - loved Norbert to the rescue - that is a new one for me And the compliment was very good.
warm regards

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 18th September 2006 10:02am for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Superb chapter!! Glad that Harry has finally been re-united with the pack and pride. I really liked the character development of Ginny, with Neville giving her advice on how to woo Harry no less! Interesting choice of character for her to have to talk with, breaks the mould and makes things more interesting.

I liked the little bit of Hagrid in this chapter. So many fanfics forget about him which is a shame. The use of Norbert was funny yet very clever. I liked the way Charlie thought of his job rather than following Order orders without question. Very realistic concerns. Not sure where your going with Corona but a new character could be interesting.

I'm glad you got rid of Mrs Black, thats very cool, or hot when you think of how she went!! (pardon the pun).

Your supposed to say things you liked and disliked in chapters you review but I find myself only able to praise. Excellent chapter, keep writing at this pace its great!!!

Monkey

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 18th September 2006 7:03am for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Olympe is superbly written. I loved Ron's idea but Sirius's is even better. The romance novel subplot continues to keep me endlessly amused. Can't wait for more. Excellent chapter.

amulder posted a comment on Sunday 17th September 2006 11:40pm for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Snape's idea?

Heres' one: use legilimency on Harry when this happens, so that he can have a poke in Voldemort's head

Otherwise, nice job with Norbert.

The opening scene was a bit unexpected. Is more coming from Elladora? Why else would she be there? Corona had best get to Gringotts first thing in the morning.

thanks for sharing

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 17th September 2006 5:29pm for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Ah, a delightful read and I *love* that solution to rescuing Hagrid. Anyone for roasted, instead of the usual "half-baked" DEs?

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Sunday 17th September 2006 3:19pm for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

Hmm, maybe Snape's idea has to do with Harry getting into Voldemort's head. I don't know, maybe. Anyway, great chapter. I'm glad they're back together. And Ron is a genius by the way. Using Norbert to find Hagrid. Loved it. Cheers.

~Ivy

karina82 posted a comment on Sunday 17th September 2006 1:35pm for Chapter 4: Ideas and Escapes (Year 5)

whatever snape figuered out has me thinking it has to do with possibly Legilimency(sp?).

it was good to see norbert in action.