For Your Own Good
2319 Tudor Lane
By Anne B. Walsh
sylvelle posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd March 2015 7:39pm for 2319 Tudor Lane
Mal Reynolds and cats called River and Firefly.,. I'm sure there is more I missed so I'll get it eventually. Nice start, An intesting beginning. Hope we can see fairly consistent updates. Look forward to it.
Cochrd posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd March 2015 1:45pm for 2319 Tudor Lane
Shiny! I love the constant Firefly references!
I really like the imagery evoked by the following excerpt -
"The heat from the radiator behind him, cranked to its highest setting on account of the late January cold snap, lulled him towards sleep, and his own words spoken aloud in his teacher's quiet voice set the scene he knew he would see."
I can almost feel myself sitting and reading in front of an open fire, slowly drifting off into fantasy and imagination... Perhaps like a leaf on the wind? :) This is the first story I've read in a while that has used such emotive language; I very much enjoyed it.
Thanks for writing!
John Ludlam posted a comment on Monday 2nd March 2015 5:28pm for 2319 Tudor Lane
A fascinating beginning. I loved the Firefly/Serenity nods - especially as Serenity was on the TV as I was reading this, spooky coincidence.
mwinter posted a comment on Monday 2nd March 2015 3:09pm for 2319 Tudor Lane
Cool start. Awaiting more.
Lesa posted a comment on Monday 2nd March 2015 1:52am for 2319 Tudor Lane
Dangerverse. Firefly. Yaaaaas. Everything is perfect, even when plot-situations aren't. Henry and John's mugs! The kittens! The nerdy-combinations! I'm in love, Anne, I really am. I always am, but this one hits an especially awesome note.
kyoshi posted a comment on Monday 7th September 2015 7:07pm for 2319 Tudor Lane