Strophe posted a comment on Friday 21st February 2014 12:38am for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Lovely Chapter.

I did miss seeing the regular characters, but getting Dumbledore's perspective is almost worth it. The vitriol with which you write Petunia is just riveting. She is like a car crash - I wish he had remained longer, just so I could watch her spew her venom. I know people in RL just like that, and I wish they would be cursed, too. Just very ugly people.

I don't quite know the English-official name for the type of narration you use, but I adore it. Some of my favorite parts are the endings of chapters, or the very beginnings. The line "Expectations are such dangerous things" as a transition just works perfectly.

The Imaginatrix posted a comment on Saturday 8th February 2014 1:39pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

I love how you characterise Dumbledore. It makes a refreshing change from some of the depictions of him I've seen since I found the Fanfiction community. Everyone seemed to turn on him after DH. I just thought JK Rowling made him more human by giving him that less than savoury past. I liked that. He's perfectly in character here and I like that too.

darksidhe posted a comment on Wednesday 25th August 2010 12:34am for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

She will say, "I told you so." Loudly, repeatedly, and worst of all, truthfully. Classic! I love it!!!

PrayingForMercy posted a comment on Sunday 2nd November 2008 3:52pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Agh, Dumbledore is too smart. Curse you, old man! Kidding, I love Dumby.
Item: Chapter is awesome.

Rob-girl posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 5:32pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Uh-oh. I hope that this all works out! I hope Dumbledore finds out the truth soon. I really want to see some romance between one of the two couples soon as well!

CodeRomance posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 5:26pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

well lets just hope he doesnt tell anyone about his suspicions! i mean he can't find harry or Remus or sirius or any of the others! oooh i'm so mad right now at dumbledore...he better not interfere!

Wistful-Stargazer posted a comment on Tuesday 20th November 2007 1:36am for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

LOL, neener-neener Dumbledore, you manipulative, conniving, old coot.
;-P

Zane posted a comment on Friday 13th July 2007 4:25pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

I always like a caring Dumbledore.
By the way, this story has given me goosebumps so far--all the way up my arm. Good job.

Jim Starluck posted a comment on Thursday 22nd February 2007 6:57pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

I have to say that I love your take on Dumbledore. Far too many authors write him without any kind of common sense, or willing to sacrifice Harry's well-being for the good of Wizardkind...I like the idea that when he found out exactly how Harry was treated, he reacted the same as everyone else: restraining himself from physically attacking the Dursleys.

Really, the way some people write him, you wouldn't think he could run Hogwarts, let alone the First War.

fanficfan posted a comment on Thursday 5th October 2006 12:00pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

OMG I LOVE YOU STORY! IT IS SO
GREAT! THE IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ!

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 6:25am for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Outstanding.

gunny

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:01pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Minerva's actions against Dumbledore are my favourite part of this chapter. Boy was he quick working that out. Great stuff.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 2:28am for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

ROFL at the ending phrase :D

Very well written, once again. I love the way the curse worked.

Dumbledre's thoughts are very well written. :) It will be fun watching him try to solve this mystery.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 1:30pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Good for Minerva!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 10:16am for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

The normally unflappable Albus Dumbledore, Headmaster of Hogwarts, et. alia., is now *severely flapped*. He adds up the pieces (cursed Dursleys, missing Sirius Black, and the odd fact that the cursed used on the Dursleys is one that no Dark Wizard *could*, let alone *would* cast) and comes to the shocking conclusion that Sirius Black had help busting out of Azkaban. In the form of a werewolf. And the pair has Harry. And they are likely in the company of at least *two* Muggleborn witches. And, worst of all (yes, even worse than having to tell Cornelius Fudge), he has to tell *Minerva NcGonagall*.

(Opening theme from "Dragnet")
The story you have just seen is fiction. No names were changed to protect *anybody*.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 3:54pm for Chapter 11: What Have You Done?

Ch.11 - - That last line was wonderful. I hate to speak ill of the dead, but Dumbledore should have known better. I like the idea of McG getting on his case.

Your Curse of the Righteous was brilliant!

Terrific all around!