PrayingForMercy posted a comment on Friday 31st October 2008 3:45pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

The first chapter of an amazing series!
Rereading it for the fourth time, so I thought this time I'd make an effort and review chapters when I read them. The poem is so great, foretelling many years to come! Makes me wonder if you had the entire plot known beforehand like JKR did, or if you're just making it up as you go along (which would be disasterous!).

Vera posted a comment on Saturday 18th October 2008 2:42am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I've been getting alerts for your stories for ages and never had time to actually sit down and read them but boy, am I glad that I did that today! I just started reading your series and it's amazingly written. I love the plot so far; definitely very intriguing. Well done!

Rob-girl posted a comment on Saturday 26th July 2008 7:27pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I like this story so far! I'm not normally big on AU, but this looks really interesting, and I think it's going to turn out to be really good! Great job.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Sunday 29th June 2008 8:59am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Hi, I read this story swveral years ago and then lost it. I have been looking for it ever since and just by accident today I found it. I am starting at the beginning and I am going to stick with it this time until I have read every word you have written concerning the Dangerverse. I just totally like the whole idea that you have come up with. The story that I read several years ago proceded right up to the den's first year in Hogwarts. Then I lost it.

tangentsferret posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 11:44am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I'm re-reading this again. I think this is the fourth time. It's that good. Just so you know.

Ali posted a comment on Sunday 9th March 2008 8:23am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I love this story. I can't tell you how many times I've been over it, rereading it while I'm waiting for the latest update. It's one of my favorite stories out there.

This chapter is great - I love Danger's fumbling, awkward, embarrassing introduction to Remus. I love Neenie (young Neenie is so precious!), and Harry is, of course, adorable. You've got a great knack for writing introductions.

CodeRomance posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 2:53pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

wow thats so cool! at first i thought her nickname was Danger (which it is but the g was like ganger..or something but anyway then i read it again and it was Danger! great chapter...very cool!

CodeRomance

Wistful-Stargazer posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 10:11am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Oooo, a mystery, cool! :-)

Owl posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd October 2007 1:01am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I like this story. It is amazingly well written. Also, you poetry is brilliant. I'm a huge fanfiction reader, and let me tell you, most of the poems (prophecies, sorting hat songs, etc...) are awful, even if the story itself is very good.

Paul posted a comment on Monday 25th June 2007 11:36pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I've enjoyed your stories so far. My favorites are the Dangerverse and Truth Amid the Lies. I've been thinking of possible stories in the Harry Potter Universe and I had an idea that I haven't seen done anywhere else. The Hogworts years of James, Sirius, Remus, Lily, Snape and others. I thought it would be an interesting story and wanted to see what one of my favorite Harry Potter fanfiction authors would think of the idea. Thanks.

LoneWolfe posted a comment on Friday 18th May 2007 11:28am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Congratulations, I'm completely hooked. I can't wait to read more!

taxzombie posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 4:58am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

I'm rereading this and finding it just as delightful as the first time I read it.

Jim Starluck posted a comment on Thursday 22nd February 2007 5:43pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Such a humble beginning... :)

Looking back over that first prophecy (not sure if that's the right word for it, but I can't think of a better one), it's amusing to just go down it line by line and check off everything that's happened or is soon to happen.

And of course, there's the stuff that has yet to happen...

Roberta Johnson posted a comment on Sunday 11th February 2007 2:10am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Oh, I've never been disappointed with a story posted her, looks like I won't be with this one either!

csktech posted a comment on Thursday 8th February 2007 7:23am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Hmmm... Ok you dangled the bait, and I watching. :) I normally don't like stories where an OC is super important to the plot line, but I'm gonna give this one a few hours and see what happens.

Ann posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2007 12:28pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

This is just too amazing. I'm in awe.
I found this link on Wikipedia after looking up "alternative universe" and I just had to read it...

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 12:27am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Very interesting start.

gunny

Donna Mobley posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 12:12pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

intriguing concept, well-written enough to send me to the next chapter! :)

lap10 posted a comment on Monday 8th May 2006 2:23am for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Having already read all of your Dangerverse, I can say ahead of time that this is a fantastic universe you've created. So I've decided to re-read it all now that you're on ffa. On to the chapter review now...

I think this is a great portrayal of Remus in the time after Nov. 1981. I had always wondered after PoA what those years must have been like for him, and I wouldn't have pegged him as surviving another decade without anyone. As for Danger, I think even in the first chapter, you've done a good job of fleshing out her character. Especially the first thing she says to Remus -- just blurts it out before she thinks about it. Your dream prophecy is obvious to readers in some spots, though not yet to the characters, yet suitably vague in others.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 30th March 2006 11:09pm for Chapter 1: March 15, 1982, Surrey

Yay - cool start! For some odd reason I've been putting off reading your fics, a chilidish reaction to your pen name I guess... But this is far from being childish! Highly intriguing, and I really look forward to reading the lot. Hermione having a big sister who's a seer is a neat twist, indeed.

Thanks for sharing - I'm off to the next chappie!

Berte