Drakon83 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th May 2014 1:55am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

leave it to the "Oh so normal they are abnormal" Dursley's to be people who would give a 2 to 3 year old a grown up drink like Tea.

Strophe posted a comment on Tuesday 11th February 2014 7:17pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Ah, the first of many cliff-hangers...

While I love everything you write, so I'm not complaining in the slightest, it's amazing to me how short these early chapters are compared with some of the later ones! You covered the revelation that Peter and Sirius switched Secret-Keeper roles, the start of Moony and Danger's romance, introduced Mrs. Dursley, and skated by a "Harry asks hard questions" scene, all in this one chapter (and I'm sure I'm forgetting a few things).

One of my favorite points is Remus' "It was bliss" coming right after the quick litany of the cereal fight. They are just so happy, all together, already. I've also always loved that Harry uses his head instead of his hand to point to Remus with "true toddler logic." It always seemed very Harry to me - the physical affection, the willingness to dismiss concerns in favor of fun and love. I know those are also just toddler things, but you have to admit, Neenie would probably consider it a bit longer. She was obviously younger than Harry was when her parents died (by a few months, but it matters when you are that young), but I think some of her early shyness comes from that. I picture it that way at least.

I also love the absolute immediacy of Danger and Remus' attraction. It's always been obvious how automatically in love they are, but I just noticed something else this time around: Remus finds out his friends thought he was the spy in this chapter. He's told this on his birthday, from a woman he doesn't know at all (yet), and on a day he's self-assessed as suicidal. Yet he doesn't dwell on this almost at all. He is "angry" and "bitter", but then Danger needs him and we don't hear about it again. He's wonderfully twitterpated.

The Imaginatrix posted a comment on Saturday 8th February 2014 9:16am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Again, I agree with Danger's assessment of Petunia. Horrible woman indeed. You characterised her perfectly in this and future chapters, but that's for later.

And I love the mentions of Aletha, and Harry's adorableness. Seriously, he's about the cutest kid ever. :D

Off I go to the next chapter!

nancypunkin posted a comment on Monday 12th August 2013 11:44am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

The little ones constantly tug on my heart strings. Just knowing what awaits them makes new wish they could stay babies forever.

Ali posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2012 8:55pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

What I love most about the beginning of this story is tiny Harry and Neenie. You do such a great job at writing small children. They're adorable and funny, and you have the reader rooting for Danger and Remus by chapter two.

Ranglar posted a comment on Friday 21st May 2010 10:18pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Ooh... I love cliffies when I don't actually have to wait!

PrayingForMercy posted a comment on Friday 31st October 2008 5:05pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Aww, baby Harry is my favourite, before he gets all angsty. Such a cute chapter. Lovey-dovey Moony xD

Rob-girl posted a comment on Saturday 26th July 2008 7:38pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Again, great job. I can't wait to continue reading this story and the other 3.

CodeRomance posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 3:06pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

OH NO! what? oh well great chapter! really well written! you should post on siye too...i think you might get more reviews and stuff! well anyway loved it!

CodeRomance

Wistful-Stargazer posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 10:28am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Too cool, I had the grim and try part figured out. The colors are obviously hair colors, but they'll figure it all out soon enough. :-)

KingsleyforPM posted a comment on Monday 6th August 2007 7:32pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

i just began and im loving this, never seen the likes of it. congratulations and keep on with these things

Jim Starluck posted a comment on Thursday 22nd February 2007 6:11pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

"By tonight, every woman on this block will know that I had a strange man in my house. They’ll have us dating by tomorrow and sleeping together the day after that." "Sounds like a good schedule to me." "Why... you... you..."

Ahh, young love. =P

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 12:50am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Very good, I am lovine this so far.

gunny

Chris1 posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 11:52pm for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Whoah. Interesting stuff. Petunia is very IC, well done :)

I like the interaction between Harry and Hermione, too. That IS Hermione, right?

:D

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 9:26am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Ch.2 - - I am hopelessly hooked. Great tale.

The idea of a prophetic poem is very original and very fine work.

Just fascinating all around.

I have always wanted Remus to be happy with a girlfriend, but I have always thought Tonks is wrong for him. But I like her too.

Just grand!

Galadrion posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 11:38am for Chapter 2: Interpretations

Yes, definitely liking this one. Must read more, after I get back...