Living with Danger
Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
The Imaginatrix posted a comment on Saturday 8th February 2014 9:49am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Poor widdle Harry! *hugs again* That always twists my heartstrings into knots. It's the third time I've read that scene and I still feel his terror like I'm right there with everyone.
Remus's dream, as I said on FFN, was awesome. I like the raft-and-river analogy. :D
And the cuteness between Danger and Remus was...well, cute. Not to mention the concepts of true-dreaming and latent magic. What you did with the HP world was wonderful. You expanded on what was already there, and the result is a marvelous spin on the storyline. Sure, you would call it a "tell" in the "Legendbreakers" world, but let's not pick over tiny details.
nancypunkin posted a comment on Monday 12th August 2013 11:54am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
The build up between Danger and Remus is just so wonderful. The way they context do quickly and honestly.. It's beautiful.
Ali posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2012 8:59pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Neenie is so serious! It's terribly cute - and then to fall asleep on Remus' shoulder? This chapter makes me grin at the mental image.
Wolf550e posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 2:32am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Hermione's speech: Hermione is ten months older than Harry. Harry is 21 months old, so she is 31 months old. At two and a half, a gifted girl like Hermione would be speaking fluently in complex sentences, and possibly learning her letters.
Fiermancer posted a comment on Monday 22nd March 2010 2:29am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Yep, my first guesses were correct, I'm enjoying this a lot so far.
PrayingForMercy posted a comment on Friday 31st October 2008 5:24pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Young love! Woo. The scene with Neenie asleep on Remus' chest was so cute.
Rob-girl posted a comment on Saturday 26th July 2008 8:55pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Haha, that ending was very cute. The beginning of the chapter, and the end were very different, and I liked that. My favourite part of this chapter was when Remus was talking to little Hermione and then when she fell asleep on his shoulder. I really hope that Remus and Danger get together soon! Great work!
CodeRomance posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 3:33pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
oh its perfectly good! stop fighting it! lol great chapter! oooh i love it! this is an amazing story and i've only read 3 chapters! oh well!
CodeRomance
Wistful-Stargazer posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 4:05pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
*SQUEE* Too freaking cool, Neenie's sister is a witch! I love this story, and with it being rated for teens, I can actually allow my 13 yr. old daughter to read it. =D
Jim Starluck posted a comment on Thursday 22nd February 2007 6:16pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
I am strongly attracted to that woman.
And that’s not good. For either of us.
Ah, Moony...if you only knew.
But then again, even when you've got a couple who work as well together as these two, love is still a dangerous thing...
=P
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 2:05am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Very good, I like where this seems to be going.
gunny
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 10:01am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
This was recommended to me by a friend who insisted I read it. Now I understand why. Absolutely fantastic chapter. I was a little worried by the OC nature of this but Danger is interesting and definitely not Mary-Sueish so my worries are over. Great stuff.
Sterling posted a comment on Sunday 4th June 2006 7:08pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Not sure I like the nickname "Danger" for a muggle clerk. Hopefully you have a bit of a background on that one. I also am not to sure about how you have Remus and Gertrude starting to fall for each other so quick. Prophetic dreams are a bit of a crutch when it comes to writing. I would advise against over-using them. Other then that it was a decent intro and has me interested in seeing where you are taking this.
AK posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 6:50am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
I tried calling Social Services, but they’re backed up for months, and unless he’s in immediate danger, they don’t want to hear about it.
--> really?
Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:02am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
So, that IS Hermione :D hurray for my guessing abilities :D
Wonderful developments, I'm off to read the next chapter. :D
Mickey posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 6:42am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
I've seen this story before but it didn't look like anything I'd want to read. However since it was good enough to go on this site I decided to read it and I wish I had sooner.
I did think Harry's reaction was overdone and I'd expect them to go to Child Protective Services with that but still a very nice story so far.
Mickey
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 1:15pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Ch.4 - - It is so sad to think about Harry at this age. It probably was like this. Makes me want to write a scene where the Dursleys are treated badly. But I'm not that kind of guy.
But I do like ot think about Ginny and or Hermione punching Vernon.
I've always wanted Remus to have someone.
Thanks for that.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 9:44am for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air
Ch.3 - - I am totally snared. This is a pulse racing chapter.
I like the construct you are draping around the canon facts to create something new.
Fine work!
Strophe posted a comment on Tuesday 11th February 2014 7:54pm for Chapter 3: Castles in the Air