Gaurav posted a comment on Thursday 10th May 2012 3:31am for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

OMG!!! I have never laughed so hard in my life.... this is such a perfect joke on Snape and that too by Ron!!!!

I was literally ROFLMAO!!!!!!

--------->>>>> Harry and Draco managed to keep their snickers to themselves in the first half of the class, but then Lockhart began enumerating ways that one could tell a werewolf in human form from another person. Among the first signs on his list were "moodiness," "bad temper," "perfectionism," and "favoritism."

Ron slipped Harry a note. He opened it.

Snape’s a werewolf!

Harry dropped his quill, slid under his desk to get it, and stuffed the sleeve of his robe in his mouth so he could laugh without being overheard.

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I am just sorry, I never got around to reading this earlier..... Brilliant, SImply Brialliant.

good luck and god speed

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 14th March 2011 2:28pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

The end of this chapter is masterful. Absolutely credible, and it hints at parts of the pack-life hitherto unstated but obvious. *Kudos*

james27 posted a comment on Wednesday 11th March 2009 11:30pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

I started reading this series once before but suddenly lost interest in it only to start it again earlier today, and this joke has made it worth it:

"How do you defeat a werewolf?" asked Neville as they made their way out of class.

"Easy," said Ron. "Cut its paws off."

The rest of the group groaned.


As bad as the joke may be, I couldn't help but laugh until I had tears in my eyes.

~James

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 10th July 2008 7:04am for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

Before this happened, I was thinking about saying I didn't feel like you were really emphasizing Harry's position of Alpha, that they seemed very equal, and I could hardly see Pack structure. I see it now, obviously. Thanks for brining it back into play, I think it was needed.

CodeRomance posted a comment on Saturday 19th January 2008 12:56pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

wow...that was impressive...wow

CodeRomance

Wistful-Stargazer posted a comment on Sunday 25th November 2007 6:03pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

::chuckling::

"How do you defeat a werewolf?" asked Neville as they made their way out of class.

"Easy," said Ron. "Cut its paws off."

*SNICKER*
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I won’t do this again, he vowed. I’ll never do something this stupid again, so I’ll never have to stop being alpha again.

Oh geez, "Power-Trip Harry" gives images of a scary future yet to unfold.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 5th August 2006 2:53pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

Good chapter.

gunny

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 9:39am for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

Harry was stupid and deserves temporary demotion. Love the details in this. Great chapter.

Jade posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 12:55pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

Philosopher's, not Sorceror's, but I'm being picky. It's just that at times, Americanisation of the HP-verse annoys me, and... ^^ I prefer it when a HP fanfic is written in British English, but that's just me. Love the story though.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Sunday 19th March 2006 12:58pm for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

Your whole pack and den idea is so much fun. It makes me wish to be part of it.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 17th February 2006 8:28am for Chapter 11: Secrets (Year 1)

The schtick about the blender was hysterical.

The part about Harry messing up - this is moving. Better to mess up early on small things than later with bigger things - Harry learned the seriousness of it in this manner.

So well done.