Return of the Aurors
Chapter 6: Separated
By Anne B. Walsh
Leleni posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2007 9:33am for Chapter 6: Separated
Very good as usual. I was ecstatic to come home and find yet another chapter of this posted. Thanks muchly, and keep up the good work!
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2007 3:52am for Chapter 6: Separated
Oh. I was thinking Latin - don't touch the three - and getting confused. Good chapter. Loved the way they were on broomsticks. More please. I get the feeling you may seriously change things the further we go into this.
amulder posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2007 3:00am for Chapter 6: Separated
At last, Ginny. Yay.
Still, it can be hard to keep track of who is who.
Those names are tough.
Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2007 1:04am for Chapter 6: Separated
Chuckle.....I've been on a Star Wars kick recently, and this story has been very enjoyable! I'm looking forward to the next bit! Thanks for the chapter!
Raindrip posted a comment on Tuesday 30th January 2007 6:45pm for Chapter 6: Separated
Forceballs? Now there's a swear! =D
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Tuesday 30th January 2007 3:33pm for Chapter 6: Separated
[23:03] <MercuryBlue> Brooms, not speeder-things? Makes sense.
[23:04] <MercuryBlue> Maraudaar?
[23:05] * MercuryBlue starts snickering uncontrollably
[23:06] <MercuryBlue> You liar, you said you'd reveal the secret of Nontritetrum in an A/N this chapter.
[23:10] * MercuryBlue wonders what the characters Drake and Neenie would think of being able to touch-talk if Draco and Hermione didn't know they were just playing parts
[23:10] * MercuryBlue thinks that came out way wrong
[23:11] <MercuryBlue> This is probably not Auror-like of me, but... die! Die! Die!
[23:12] <MercuryBlue> ^ good line
[23:12] * MercuryBlue has to wonder how the brooms are going boom when they don't have explodable fuel tanks
[23:12] <MercuryBlue> She snorted. So now I think I can see the future. What’s next? I learn to use the Force like Drake? Not likely.
[23:12] <MercuryBlue> ^ also good line
[23:12] <MercuryBlue> 'Forceballs'?
[23:13] <MercuryBlue> Why is Maraudaar described as 'ruined', not 'destroyed' or some other synonym for 'reduced to smithereens'? 'Ruined' kinda implies it's still there.
Crys posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2007 2:07pm for Chapter 6: Separated