Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 3:26am for Chapter 3: Arrival

Mysteries, mysteries....

Why did the white wizard want the children to drink the water? It doesn't seem to have hurt them in any way, and may have even helped.

Did Draco experience the same feeling of shame when he drank the water that Harry did?

For a moment I thought that was Sirius the dog, but then remembered this is post 4th year, Sirius hasn't gone through the veil yet (although having it come out in Narnia is an interesting idea.)

The water fight was good. How did Draco feel during it? I get the impression that he's never had a chance to be a child, and wonder what he thought when just having fun?

Good story. Thanks for writing.

Tom A.

(PS, you don't have to answer my questions in a reply - I'd much rather get the answer in the story.)

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Sunday 21st May 2006 10:44pm for Chapter 3: Arrival

I take it the present Kings and Queens are modeled after the Pack-parents.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Saturday 20th May 2006 8:54am for Chapter 3: Arrival

Curiouser and curiouser. I like... not yet as much as DwD, but it could happen! Thanks for the update.

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 2:42pm for Chapter 3: Arrival

Ooh, that was very good. I like King Giles, he seems fun. Draco...hmm. I love the guy, he's not as much of a git as I expected him to be. Cheers.

~Ivy

Mouse posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 11:57am for Chapter 3: Arrival

This is quite a interesting chapter. For a moment, I thought that the dog was sirius.