jua-chan posted a comment on Wednesday 27th November 2013 4:24pm for So Close

Wow, really like the chapter. This is a very interesting universe, a brilliant idea. I feel sorry for Sirius. He must be really lonely. His mental image of centaur Harry is not that far off. The idea made me laugh.

triciaelbl posted a comment on Tuesday 26th November 2013 7:47am for So Close

I love how this is developing! Also I am very excited for killdeer, it is my favorite of your originals. Can't wait to see how it is all going to progress.

Anansii posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 11:32pm for So Close

Sirius is closer than he realizes to the truth, isn't he? Glad to see Sirius in better case than he was in canon. And I like Grasseye/Harry and his teacher, too. I'm increasingly reminded of Mowgli, though in this case he really IS a wolfcub. :)

Thanks for the centaurs - I'd like to see more of them.

karm23 posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 8:25pm for So Close

Oh my! Poor Sirius. Things are looking a bit different from DV, but you do manage to get your own characters in there, which is one of the things I love about your writing. Sirius was a little too close to home with the centaur line of thinking... I wonder what his reaction will be when he finds out what Remus did to Harry and himself. I also wonder what Harry's reaction will be when he sees a human flying a broom for the first time. All in all, looking like a very interesting story, as yours always are. Until next time!