MercuryBlue posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 6:23am

Please tell me it isn't really going to end like this.

Well-written, worth reading, but I'm having trouble keeping back tears. (Wait--that was the point, wasn't it?)

I gather Aletha was hallucinating?

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 19th April 2006 4:52pm

Sad, yes, but nice at the same time. An interesting approach to recounting the final battle.

Meg posted a comment on Wednesday 19th April 2006 2:05pm

Oh Lord you suck. Sobbing like a baby here. :P

Meg

BT posted a comment on Wednesday 19th April 2006 12:10pm

Argh. I read this before finishing Living with Danger, so now when I'm reading the rest of the story I'm going to be sad, thinking about them being dead : (

Fantastic story, though.

Elfguard48 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th April 2006 12:08am

(sniffle, sniffle)Wipes tears from eyes.
I think I need to invest in the kleenez company.
This is very well written and invokes strong emotions. Thank you for writing it.(stops to wipe more tears away) Looking forward to more stories.
TAke care

Lynn1 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 10:11am

You're just not allowed to end the story this way *sniffle*.

Mary Morley posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 8:46am

As usual, this was brilliant. Depressing as all hell, but brilliant. I hope this is just an experiment in angst and not a new trend.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 8:36am

Well, that brought tears to my eyes. Nice finish. Tom A.

Roxy1 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 7:49am

If they all ever had to die, I think that is the one way i would be okay with it. But please dont kill of the pack and pride in the real story....if I cried this much over a one shot, I dont want to think how much id cry over the realy story. Great story though!

Ishtar posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 5:42am

BYOT indeed. I had to use a napkin.

Now that this is out of your system, may I hope that the real ending of the series will be a bit more upbeat? Please?

zac posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 12:31am

i am bawling here an dcan barely see the keyboard. this was amazing. so sad and yet so happy at the same time. Thank you.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Monday 17th April 2006 11:37pm

The most tragic sort of story is when the hero dies while winning the war, in essence making the victory empty. While you write extaordinarily well, I sometimes wish that you would do other than pyrhhic victories. The closest tha tI have seen is when the Hogwarts founders let Danger stay alive.
Thanks for your effort, but I really would like a happy ending at some point, as long as you do not stop writing
warm regards

Patches posted a comment on Monday 17th April 2006 8:22pm

Sweet misery! Happy Ending! But sweet sad that all that worked so hard did not "live" to see the dream come true. A fitting tribute to the marauders and friends! A white memorial is more appropriate for the warriors of the "light"! Thanks for writing. pms

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 17th April 2006 4:01pm

Whoa!! That was a "kick-ass" short piece, there. Sad without being at all dark.