Mulch Diggums posted a comment on Tuesday 19th June 2007 3:57pm for Chapter 7

It's only a good plot ferret if it bounces.

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 4:47pm for Chapter 7

Saw an author's note on another story and immediately thought of this; copying and pasting here...

"A/N: Just something I threw together one day so the plot ferrets would leave me alone. Plot bunnies are nice fluffy little things that hop across your field of vision, twitch their cute little pink noses at you, and hop away. Plot ferrets are mean, nasty, little things that sink their needle sharp fangs into your ankle, and don't let go until you sit down at the keyboard. Mean little buggers...Let GO now!"

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 6th August 2006 9:22am for Chapter 7

Fantastic final section. I really want to know what will happen next. Great story. I especially like James not wanting to be alpha and Snape's experiences in the Den.

Fate posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 4:42pm for Chapter 7

Creepy ending!
Can't wait for more!!

Ishtar posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 4:23am for Chapter 7

You don't need plot ferrets. Those can bite at your kneecaps instead of just nibbling at your ankles and toes. If you get a bunch of plot ferrets, you'll need plot rhinos to get rid of them, and there will just be no end to it.

Just expand the size of your Bunny Hutch. (Mine's gone duplex already.)

Lovely work, as usual.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 12:10am for Chapter 7

Very interesting! That last little scene from Godrics Hollow is a little too obvious but I think you could do great things with it.

I know this is AU from the real Dangerverse but I was just curious as to whether you could have Harry still be the heir of Gryffindor and James unlocks his powers!!

Keep updating!!

Monkey

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 4:05pm for Chapter 7

"On some occasions, fate needs no temptation."

Why do I have the feeling that this iteration of the Dangerverse has Lily's interference with the first spell Voldemort aimed at Harry sufficiently disrupting the second spell in such a way as to send Voldemort careening through time in James and Lily's wake?

Matthew4 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 10:48am for Chapter 7

It's quite possible to stand it, considering this is one of the better fanfictions I've read. I love your characterization of James and Lily and how everyone else would have changed with the events they're going through. It's absolutely amazing the way you develop Remus and Sirius and focus on the other characters who have mainly been shunted aside in Rowling's books. I love every single one of your fanfictions and can't wait to see how you get Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione to work out in both the main Dangerverse and the AUs. Keep up the good work!

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 6:46am for Chapter 7

Plot ferret?

Anne B. Walsh replied:

To eat plot bunnies, of course!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 2:35am for Chapter 7

Very nice development here and such a tasty teaser of an ending; I'm envious. ;)

Bravo!

Darkness posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 1:26am for Chapter 7

That was Tommy boy, wasn't it? The long-fingered dude whose hands came out of the portal at the end of the chapter. But how is that possible? If Voldie is in spirit form, does that mean that his orginal biological body contained another Horcrux besides his soul? Am very confused.

I loved the James/Lupin talk. It made Lupin seem more human. In most fics he is this really perfect character with no flaws and a tragic streak. I liked the way you portrayed him.

On ch6: Though mentions of Snape's affections towards Lily usually makes me wanna puke, I really felt for Snape in ch6. It was nice seeing him act not all Snape-y for once.

Aberbadger posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 10:55pm for Chapter 7

It's 'Muse', the amazing bouncing plot iguana!

Canis posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 10:53pm for Chapter 7

More of this please.