MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th January 2007 6:13am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

I really liked Ray's internal thoughts about the whole situation. Loosing his Mother and facing the possibility of loosing Peri. Really well written and believable for what his age is.

You do like your melodrama don't you, but we all saw a "catch" coming if not quite that. I like that it was Lilly who did it. Nice to see a challenge to (pardon the pun) Lilly's "lilly white" character!

Please keep writing this is great!

Monkey

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2007 6:56am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Oh bad words, bad words, bad words. I'd swear but I don't think you want X-rated feedback. That was MEAN. Thank goodness I have another chapter waiting.

PerfesserN posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2007 8:18am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Arrrrgh! You horrible horrible person. Now that you've painted Danger, um, Peri into a corner you can just levitate her out of it.



I'm waiting.

Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 5:02am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Horrible? Oh yes! Wonderfully, devastatingly, earth-shatteringly horrible. Too bad my dictionary is still in a box after we moved this fall, or I'd give you a delicious, long list telling you how horrible you are. So, not only is Malfoy cursed, so is Ray and now also Peri and the child she's carrying. No wonder Ray's been sleeping so much. I hope they find a cure, at least for the good guys. Lucius dying is quite ok, but the rest... And he probably knew of the spell's backtracking ability, didn't he? This being a place for polite reviews, I'll refrain from putting my viev of that perticular male into words. I do so hope that Harry and the rest can help. I guess you have a trick or two up your sleeve. You are *deliciously* horrible, after all. Not just horrible.

Have a splendid, creative new year! I do look forward to seeing whatever you come up with next. Be it in this story or Dangerverse.

Cheers!
Berte

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 1:16pm for Chapter 12: Sorrow

P.S. I wish you a very Joyous and Successful New Year! Thank you for the many hours of complete enjoyment!

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 1:12pm for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Yes, you are bad! But a great writer. Thank God you seem to update pretty quickly when you are able. Peri's pregnant with Malfoy's child? You are also twisted! You are killing me here. I thought that Remus got to them before he had time. Obviously not. Well, I really have to see this one play out, not that I didn't have to before. I love the other story too. Please, do not even think of going to bed tonight until you finish the next two chapters! Keep up the excellent work!

Tanydwr posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 11:03am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Bloody hell!
How can you do that to all of them? Peri, Draco, Remus... Even Harry, if he realises the problems. Of course, Lily probably had no idea it would have such far reaching consequences...
Poor Draco. He and Remus were so happy for a little while.
I did like the Sirius/Harry/Hermione interaction - very cute.
I know I've been a lazy arse about reviewing recently. Real life got in the way. Uni's quite different! I still have an essay to write, not to mention editing the first one, by the fifteenth. And three consequetive exams. Fun. Still, I'm enjoying it.
Keep up the excellent work - and have a Happy New Year!
Lol, Tanydwr

Viridian posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 8:59am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Ugh. Yeah, that's pretty horrible, all right. = (

kainboa posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 7:41am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

great chapter, can't wait to see what happens with the gang

Gardengirl posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 1:53am for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Eh, no more horrible than this year has already been for me. I rather appreciate you getting the horridness out before '07 comes in I'm banking on it being ever so much better than '06!

Thanks for the update, Happy New Year, and keep well ~

Danielle posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 7:52pm for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Aw come on! Now Anne, that's just low... not only is Remus going to loose Draco/Ray to the curse but now Peri too?!?! And I dont even think that he's realized that that is what affecting Ray too... of course i have faith that all things will work themselves out in the end since this is one of your stories... I am also curious to see where Peri is since she is in a similar physical state to the last time she had an out of body experience like that.....well i cant wait for more and now its bed time for sicky....as always keep up the fantastic work and perhaps there will be some LSSR in our future?

weasley_freckles posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 5:05pm for Chapter 12: Sorrow

Anne! You. Are. Evil. I can't write much more. The tears are blurring my vision.

*Megan*

AutumnHeart posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 4:40pm for Chapter 12: Sorrow

OK - you're horrible. But I still have faith that you'll pull a happy ending out of this somehow...please? Without damaging Ray and Peri or Harry too much more?

I'm looking forward to your next updates in any of your stories, horrible chapter endings or not :)