Vivens cum Pericula
Chapter 13: Hope
By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2007 7:06am for Chapter 13: Hope
LOL at the grown-ups being the indisputable obstacle. I love those kids. More please. Superb chapters. This is so much fun. Poor Ray, though in a way it was positive that Peri would go with him it was also a scary thought.
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2007 4:51am for Chapter 13: Hope
What are they worried about the grown-ups for? They'll do it with the grown-ups' permission or without it, so why bother asking first?
No, not what I was expecting, but nobody's worse off this chapter than last, and I'm seeing a path to a happy ending (possibly not the path you're planning, but a path nonetheless), and it's an update, so life is good.
I was going to email you to ask if Peri and Remus's happy ending had any relation to Aurora and Philip's, which still seems possible and poetically appropriate if we equate Maleficient with the curse on Peri (because you can't tell me Remus won't have any part in getting rid of the curse), but given this new development, I'm not so sure you're heading for the Sleeping Beauty ending.
Lostchyld posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2007 7:27pm for Chapter 13: Hope
I don't know why the chaos those four manage to cause ever surprises me. It shouldn't.
What doesn't surprise me is that the chapter has left me wanting more. You're extraordinarily good at that.
Cheers and Happy New Year.
-Caet
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2007 4:38pm for Chapter 13: Hope
Oh, Merlin!! I can see these kids going and trying this ritual anyway and pulling it off. It will be interesting to see how the next few chapters evolve.
Dani posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2007 2:31pm for Chapter 13: Hope
Argh! I dont even know how to express how i feel about this chapter.... it was so sad and hopeful and funny and innocent all wrapped up into one neat little package...i absloutly adore the way you write the cubs when they were little, i think thats why LWD is my fave out of the main verse... but i just wanted to reach into the computor and give Draco a big hug and Harry wanting Lily to be alive so that he could kick her made me smile dispite the grim reason, and little meghan is adorable and i loved the last line cause when youre at that age adults are the largest obstical even when you are considering speaking to the dead... soo im loving this story and cant wait for the next chapter!
Gardengirl posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2007 1:59pm for Chapter 13: Hope
Thanks for the update! I can't say I'm surprised that the children want to sort this out without the grownups' interference... they wouldn't be the children we know if they didn't!
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th January 2007 6:21am for Chapter 13: Hope