Facing Danger
Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)
By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Don Parsons posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 3:51pm for Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)
Another great chapter. I loved Ginny's version of the Spanish Inquisition sketch. I'm disappointed that Harry seems to be making the same 'Cho mistake' that JKR's Harry did. "Our' Harry should be smarter than that. At this point in time, canon Harry has never been part of a loving family to see how true love matches work and has never seen the 'real' Ginny Weasley, just a girl overcome by her crush. Hopefully his meeting with Cho will quickly show him how far short of Ginny she falls.
karina82 posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 2:18pm for Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)
very cool chapter. good thing sirius got to kreacher on time.
Mariposa posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 2:08pm for Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)
Definitely plenty of good stuff! I loved it!
weasley_freckles posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 1:33pm for Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)
/me sighs at how thick Harry can be at times...He'll smarten up and notice Ginny eventually though. Hopefully soon. It was a great chapter, Anne! Pack-parents were barely in it at all. /me is starting to get worried as the MCE gets closer and closer. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
~Megan~
Louise Postlethwaite posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 10:53am for Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)
Yay! A new chap! and Ginny is going to be mad, but I suppose Harry has to learn some things the hard way.
Loved the quote: "Hello. My name is Harry Potter. You killed my father. And my mother. Prepare to die." and it's a good dare, but I can't see Harry really saying that... but fun idea :D
Good story, love the new chap, want more, so I have to say Update quick please.
+first time I've reviewed you here, thanks for leading me to the site and all the great authors here. :D
Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 4:21pm for Chapter 11: Breakfast and Beginnings (Year 5)