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harryp123 posted a comment on Monday 16th April 2007 2:34pm

good chapter. can't wait for the next one.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 16th April 2007 10:18am

I love facing danger! The whole dangerverse is great and brilliant and your a great and awesome writer! Thank you for writing.
Wonder whether Cho is hiding something in her past, a bad experience with Blood magic. If so many of the Purebloods use it, why would it seem sooo very dark.
Can't wait for more!
Monkey

amulder posted a comment on Monday 16th April 2007 3:39am

great chapter, by the way. Love the Cho disaster. Worried about Maya -- hope she asks for help!

keep up the great work!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 9:57pm

It's worrying how simultaneously belieavable and horrifying the pureblood marriage mart is. Cho is crazy, frankly. Swearing in blood is something that even small kids do. Great stuff though. I think Harry just dug himself into a very deep hole indeed. More please. Great chapter.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 8:59am

I sure hope Harry has Cho out of his system now! She just is NOT for him. Ugh.

So the rescue is next chapter?? I hope it goes smoothly, but I'll be surprised if it does.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 7:43am

Sheesh, talk about someone who doesn't understand. I hope Cho can keep her mouth shut about this, or at least think about it clearly a bit more since she seems to have that silly meme that "blood magic = dark magic" stuck in her head. I suspect this isn't going to help any of them, but I can hope it'll point Harry toward someone better for him.

April posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 4:39am

OMG!! Cho is a B***H!!! HOW DARE SHE THINK THAT OF HARRY!!! I hope that u update soon!

Quizer posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 4:33am

Well, there goes that crush. I'd say it's about time it happened, although the way it happened was quite... unexpected. Cho acted far more hysterical than she had any right to. Is there something traumatic concerning blood magic in her past, or what? I'm looking forward to the explanation. I also hope she gets to realize her mistake at some point.

I'm also looking forward to the rescue of Graham. The foreshadowing is quite effective, with all the preparations and the dozen of different snags and problems they have to deal with. I do hope it will work out at least reasonably well, without any deaths or maimings or deeply traumatic experiences.

Also looking forward to what will become of Maya. What you're doing with her is a theme I've always liked.

Good luck with the next chapter, and keep it up!


Quizer

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 5:28pm

Well! I know I said I didn't like Cho and that I'd tolorate her for as long as you wroter her, but that was one hell of a way to get her pissed at Harry. Jeez, I knew she was a drama queen, but your version of her fit is lots of fun. I mean, J.K.'s was good, but yours was a little dirtier and had me cracking up. God, I hate it when people jump to conclusions. Dark Magic? Sleeping with them? What the hell kind of reasoning is that? Wow. Anyway, I like how you made it complicated for the Pride to rescue Graham and I liked how they solved their problems and that it all made sense. Cheers.

~Ivy

Kail Ceannai posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 4:49pm

Thanks for the update =)

karina82 posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 11:50am

freaken harry should have held his tung. either what he reveled to cho may or may not bring problems, i do hope it doesn't bring problems.
hope the rescue of graham isn't to angsty.

Frelling posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 11:01am

Well, Cho's just a little accusatory bitch, now, isn't she? Just as well, though - gets her out of the way and clears the path for Ginny, which I'm assuming from Danger's dream is where you've been heading with this.

Another great chapter from you; I'm really enjoying this story thought I don't typically like AU. Your writing style is excellent and I love the way you've realistically made the changes in the kids' upbringing reflect in their personalities.

BackInBlack posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 10:06am

Hmmm, how many problems is Cho going to cause for Harry & Co. now? That's okay, she needs to go away anyhow. Can Ginny be the one to comfort Harry? ;)

I was so glad to get the email that this story had been updated. Last month, I read the whole series from the beginning and remembered why I like it so much. You follow canon, but use your own road map. There are enough twists and turns that it's not like reading a re-do of the books.

Excellent work!

Gardengirl posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 6:24am

Hm, very open minded, isn't she?

Thanks for the update!

dave84768768 posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 3:11am

Oh, my... Well done! Interesting twist to the Cho girlfriend situation... The dark potter rises, umbridge will be so happy.

zac posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 1:22am

Good...I hope that Cho doesn't cause too many problems for the pack and pride

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2007 6:05am

Poor Brian sounded like he was having a rough time but it's nice to read a fic where Remus isn't the only pro-active werewolf. Liked the Bartemius bit and loved the Notts' section. Great bit with Peeves too. More please. Love this story so much.

LilyPad posted a comment on Monday 9th April 2007 8:39am

Very good, update soon, blah blah blah...

"It’s too late now." Minerva sank into a chair. "Albus, what have we come to? You-Know..."

Albus gave her a stern look.

"Very well, Voldemort on the loose and absolutely nothing being done to stop him, a minor functionary like Umbridge dictating our every move, and Harry Potter has no idea of the dangers involved in tweaking her nose. I believe he thought he could get away with it!"



You either need an 'is' after 'Voldemort' or a 'with' before 'You-Know...'

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd April 2007 6:04pm

Sweet Merlin on a pogo stick! I've been really anxious for another chapter. I'm glad to see this one. I've come to terms that you're going to play out the Cho aspect to the bloody end. Also, that spongebob-esque song was brilliant and had me laughing and singing along. Cheers.

~Ivy

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd April 2007 7:21am

Looks like Theodore Nott has some Serious Reservations about the Dark Tiddler; however, for whatever reason, his father doesn't. Umbudge continues to harass the students (and be harassed in turn by Peeves). Ginny is working on the model of the very house that Theo is *imprisoned* in (possible rescue attempt?) along with Harry and Ron. Draco is bonding with (amazingly) Neville Longbottom (considering that canon Draco feuds almost as much with Neville as with the Trip and Ginny, this is Definitely Different).