karina82 posted a comment on Sunday 17th September 2006 1:35pm

whatever snape figuered out has me thinking it has to do with possibly Legilimency(sp?).

it was good to see norbert in action.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Friday 15th September 2006 6:53am

Excellent chapter. I particularly liked how you made the scene between Luna and Draco so strained. I really felt for Draco worrying about what he had done to Luna.
Nice twist as well, I originally thought Draco would be the betrayer but it looks as though Luna is the one who does that.
The order meeting was good, even though I think your idea of Hermione being accepted is a good one, I don't think it would ever happen and is most definitely out of canon for some of the characters! I know, I know its massive AU but thats what I feel. I like the concept though.

Write more please, your a great writer!

Monkey

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Friday 15th September 2006 5:57am

Luna's vision was at once horrendous and beautiful. Poor Draco. I love the idea of the Phantom of the Opera singing. I'm thinking that maybe Luna will go with Lucius as some sort of spy perhaps or under Imperius (which is the obvious one). My jaw dropped at the possible Slytherins line. Worried as I am about Hagrid, I had to grin at the pack line. More please. Excellent chapter. This story just gets better and better, though I think more improvement is going to be impossible soon.

Graup posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 3:29pm

Enjoyed this chapter, although precious little transpired. This appears to be a transitional chapter.

The scene with Draco, Lucius, and Luna was very interesting - I look forward to seeing how that pans out in the future.

Samantha posted a comment on Wednesday 13th September 2006 5:46am

Great chapter. I've been a fan ever since the beginning of the series but this is my first review.

I really don't think Luna's vision is what they assume it to be. When has Lucius Malfoy ever approved of singing? And he calls Luna 'Snowbird' and 'my lady', both are Draco's pet names for her. It sounds more like Draco to me.

Or maybe I just don't want Draco to die.

Keep up the good work!

jj84gal posted a comment on Tuesday 12th September 2006 1:40pm

I love it, love it, love it!!!! I have been reading Dangerverse since the kids where in third year, and I have to tell you each chapter is better then the last. I can't wait to read the next installment, what will happen with Corona, is she sincere or will she betray the Order? I just can't wait to find out!!!

Mandy posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 3:27am

Oooh, another good original character :-) I like her, and it's always good to see a nice Slytherin. I also like your purebloods' names. They fit tradition nicely.

Hehe. The Pack'll be back together on my birthday! Yay!
Clever Neenie - that was the perfect thing to say in her first Order meeting.
"Could [the Twins] finally be starting to grow up?" Gah! There's a scary thought :-)

"Things happen," Draco said. "And even people who are strong can die."

The Cubs're too grown up, you know. All of the Pride are, poor things. At least they've got each other, and the Marauders and Twins to keep them childish.

One of my favourite lines:

this is beautiful, but he could kill you...

Why would Luna say she doesn't love Draco, and going off with his murderer? Is she pulling a Snape (spying)? Or maybe she thinks Voldemort can help her use dark magic to bring back the dead. I won't cry, because it won't happen. It won't, it won't, it won't. (Hoping if I say it enough times, it'll come true.)

Looking forward muchly to next chapter, as per usual.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 1:07am

some very nice progress in thing -thanks - and I quite liked the way you have shown that not each and every member of the pure-bloods is a rotter

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 9:18pm

I never would have suspected Luna! I of course, along with everyone else thought it would be Draco. What a surprise. Of course I couldn't imagine Luna or Draco going with Lucius. That is just wrong. I'm glad Luna told
Draco. At least now there is some chance of avoiding the seer prognosis. I'm glad Harry knows when he gets to leave the Durseley's. At least he has something to look forward to. What a surprise! I can't imagine Sirius bringing home a pure blood witch! That is going to be interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing. pms

kendiara posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 3:32pm

No kill Draco! Bad dog no biscuit!

Okay I'm channelling Accidentally in Love as my personal "proof" that this is a hoax on ol Malfoy.

Phenominal as always :)

Megan posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 3:04pm

I absolutely loved the chapter, Anne! I'm really glad Sirius' efforts were completely wasted, and he got at least Corona. I can't wait to read more!
*Megan*

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 2:33pm

That was good. I didn't cry during the vision. I freaked out a little and I'm still swimming in denile. So, to me in my stubborn head, it's not going to happen. Great chapter. I'm glad that Harry's finally going to be able to get home. Sirius too, I hope. He seems to have managed to find one person who wants to fight Voldemort. Cheers.

~Ivy

Ken Warner posted a comment on Wednesday 6th September 2006 11:36pm

an interesting and odd chapter - I am glad you had Letha talk somewhat seriously of the downsides of lupus also - but she did not mention one of the long term consequences which is mental deterioration - several close friend of my wife have severe lupus, and the constant pain and opportunistic illnesses have very definitely sapped their mental acuity - in one case probably by half. Let's not forget transmissability also - well over 60% of male children born to women with active lupus are mildly to moderately retarded.
No so-called protection against Voldie is worth that when the alternative is actually learning Occulomency.(spelling??)

This concept is really ruining the story for me - it has been horribly painful to watch the decline over the years and to see it deliberately inflicted, even to a fictional character, makes me ill.

There is no denying your writing or story telling skills, but this might be the last review I leave.

Maddie Potter posted a comment on Wednesday 6th September 2006 6:22pm

oh god, i can't wait any longer! i love this story!

i cannot WAIT until the next installment. i want to see how Harry gets to headquarters (sp?) ! :D

there are heaps of !!!!s huh?

Maddie Potter

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Wednesday 6th September 2006 10:23am

I kind of like the extra explanation of the blood ritual that Remus wants to do with Harry.

The little duel was cool but kind of random and out of the blue.

I know I may be wrong but you have draco say he has only recently got his transformation and I'm sure he had done it in the previous story.

Write more I beg!

Monkey

Jim Spencer posted a comment on Wednesday 6th September 2006 3:41am

Please tell us Harry is not going to waste the entire year on Cho.

Another good chapter in an excellent series of stories. I have read only a handful of stories more than once but am working my way back through yours.

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Tuesday 5th September 2006 1:53pm

That was a good chapter. I'm glad that Letha talked to Harry a bit more about the ritual. That challenge between Harry and Hermione was really nicely done. I think I'm too bitter of a person to have accepted things as gracefully as Harry did. Eh. So, now Petunia knows about where Harry's been all this time and with who. By the way, I'm going to think of this chapter as a day late birthday present. Yay me. Cheers.

~Ivy

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 5th September 2006 8:34am

This was a good chapter. Harry is learning to cope with being at the Durseley's. That is good. I'm glad family is checking up on him. It is making the time go faster. It is good that Hermione was able to win and for Harry to relearn the lesson he has learned before. I hope it sticks this time. That and I hope he sees Ginny soon. The sculpting is a good past time for her. I look forward to hearing more about that. Thanks for writing. pms

graup posted a comment on Tuesday 5th September 2006 7:18am

Good chapter. I was hoping you would rescue Harry during this chapter. Maybe it can be in the next one.

Interesting that you had Hermione win the Alpha contest. Good show, Hermione.

Also interesting that you had Draco keeping Harry company. I thought it might be a little red snow fox :)

Amamama posted a comment on Tuesday 5th September 2006 6:42am

Cool! Yay to Artisi!Ginny. I love it when our favourite witches and wizards are allowed to get creative. So kudos to you for giving Ginny some stress relieving clay.

Poor Harry - it's not easy to feel you're out of the loop and somebody else takes your place, but he seems to work it out nicely.

Sirius - "Thank you for the offer," he said unsteadily, resisting the urge to wipe his lips. Wait until she can’t see you. "But I’m afraid I’m not interested. Good night, Mam’selle." LOL!

Thanks for sharing!

Berte