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Minerva Granger posted a comment on Thursday 10th September 2009 8:22pm

Very interesting end. Having said that, I will get around to re-writing it, with your permission. While this is GREAT as an angsty story, I must admit that I prefer happy endings.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Who said it's over?

Mulch Diggums posted a comment on Thursday 10th September 2009 8:48am

Please, a final chapter with a twist. This seems uncomplete to me. Also--I thought that fire could never burn any of those with Gryffindor's gift. How did Moony kill Danger and himself?

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Ooh, what an intelligent question!

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 6:02pm

Oooh, I have an idea. If you're planning a happily ever-after moment you either need a REALLY good afterlife or that the whole sequence never happened (this is what I'm leaning towards). You could do that by it being
(a) nightmare
(b) Voldie messing with their brains, trying to drive
(i) them all insane
(ii) or just Harry insane
or (c) a good bit of historical revisionism on the part of their cosmic allies, the founders and co.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

*giggles insanely* You're so close and yet not quite there!

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 5:55pm

I'm surprised you managed to pull a 'happy-enough' ending from this - its not true tragedy, which I'm grateful for, I like them all to much to see them subjected to a depressing ending (as opposed to a depressing story, which is another matter entirely). I probably shouldn't be surprised.

That said, I'm dying for another chapter and a twist (just not half so desparately as I was at chapter 1 and 2).

Anne B. Walsh replied:

I have a talent for finding happiness in weird, weird places. More of that soon.

LynnTerald posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 2:32pm

Reading the other reviews and then your responses has left me curious. TWIST!!

If I don't like the last chapter, then I can deny that it exists.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Yeah, that seems to be the general consensus. Besides, I think I've got an original spin on a very, very old idea... or at least a funny one.

LynnTerald posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 2:24pm

I like the ending, but if you have another chapter waiting in the wings then I'd like to see that one too. Double EVIL!!

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Evil is fun.

Chindabe posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 1:28pm

Aww... I wish Harry woulda like... I dunno... punched 'im in the face before dying. •__•

But... my eyes are feeling hot... DDD': ... Hermione died such a quick-yet-gruesome death... DDDD:

... but the ending was hilarious. x3



WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIITT!!

ADD THE TWIST. NOW. ADD IT. NOOOOWWW DDDDDDDD:<

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Twist... if you insist!

derky4 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 12:55pm

I love the angst from this story and I think it's best to leave it how it is. This was a phenomenal piece of art.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Aww, thanks!

Ryan Illuser posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 12:43pm

Give me a twist Please!!!!! That was amazing I'm shaking with glee over here woman. it's just so cool even though they all died they died together and took voldy with them.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Twist there shall be! And wow, shaking with glee... that sounds awfully good!

Ginger posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 10:55am

Twist oh Gods, twist... don't stop this story. WOW.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

It seems you're impressed.

ClarenceRose posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 10:19am

Wow.
That was terrific.
Depressing...
But good.
I'm definately not against a final chapter with a twist.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Depressing indeed. But has weirdness built in.

BecauseISaidSo posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 10:02am

you have the oddest way of making the saddest stuff somehow happy. I love you writing and would love so more of it, so yes. If your muse wants you to write another chapter of this story then I would love to read it.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

My muse is insane, so don't listen to her too much... but yeah, she says go on.

Hannah3 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 8:11am

Twist!

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Yes'm!

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 7:08am

Wow! This is quite a story. I actually like this ending but curiousity killed the cat and I like cats. I would like to see your other ending "with a twist"! Please continue to satisfy my "curiousity" with your great ideas. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more BC and FD also. pms

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Ending with a twist, coming right up!

Summerkins posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 6:03am

Bahhhhhhh it's so...what. I don't get why Luna let it happen if she was just going to kill Ron and then herself...maybe i'm just slow. The berries Ginny had...i guess they were poison then, but I can't be sure (i clearly need to reread) if Neville got some too.

I think I'm having trouble understanding exactly what happened to everyone.

I think i'd like to see a final chapter with a twist. This definitely reminds me of one shot you did, where everyone dies. Aweee,dnfgjkg

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Luna didn't let it happen... exactly. All will be explained. And yes, the berries Neville and Ginny had were poison.

Celevon posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 5:40am

How about a final chapter where Harry dies with a smile and Voldie dies screaming? As soon as Voldies dies, Harry comes to life again, and then do an epilogue?

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Voldie screaming, or at least freaking out, coming right up!

princess ducky posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 5:18am

Oh oh oh Another chapter please- it would be so interesting and if I didn't like it I could just pretend this was the last chapter

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Sounds like a plan.

Bad Pasta posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 4:16am

How... peculiar. A happy ending where everyone dies? And just when I thought you were enjoying tormenting the poor Pack/Pride. And as for twists - please, don't! This was a great story, but I think they've suffered enough for one fic. Still, an excellent chapter, with most inventive demises!

Now, about that BC...

Anne B. Walsh replied:

I didn't say the twist would be about torturing them more! If anything, it's good for them! And yes, BC is next.

elizablaine posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 3:52am

Hmm, semi happy or twist *raises and lowers hands in scale like motion* Oooo tough choice!!

*Throws goodies into basket and hands it over* Ah well since we're getting it anyway, Good Job!!

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Oooh goodies... *opens up Word*

Georgina posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 1:49am

This was amazing, something a bit different and bittersweet...

Though I would like to see an option of a final chapter with a twist :D

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Twist and shout!