By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Lynn Terald posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 4:29am
I want to scream and pull my hair out, but it was so good that I think I'll just wait until the next chapter to go hysterical.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 2:00am
The bits with Hermione under the spell were just plain creepy. Loved the way that Cho lost the necklace. Ron's actins were brilliant as well. The fight scene was really exciting. I'm really worried about Hermione now. Excellent chapter. More please.
tangentsferret posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 11:36pm
All right, you are provisionally forgiven for the trauma caused by the ending of the last chapter. It was partly my own fault anyway: I had forgotten my resolution to never, ever, read your stuff when there is only a single new chapter posted, lest there be a cliffhanger. And here I am doing it again, too. Darn you for being such a good author! Darn you, say I!
I know that in order to be a Good Reviewer I am supposed to post Literary Criticism or something (during the hiatus I wandered off and read other authors on the site and now I have a rampant phobia involving reviewing, shovels, fireants, and large pots of hot water, {I can't make spaghetti at all now} thanks to Bob and Alyx) but as usual I really couldn't spot anything Crit-worthy, unless the fact that the last chapter was so painful to read the first time around that this time I broke my usual habit and didn't re-read it before starting the new one counts.
Dragon63 posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 9:24pm
Apricot preserves?!? Oh, my... this I've got to see!
takon65 posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 7:31pm
I like the last few chapters:)
Hagrid needs to be avenged, if you let Fang help, I'll give you the easy recipe for Pesto and Alfredo Sauces....(Anything to feed the author :-P)
I'll think on a possible plot twists...
mjc posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 4:46pm
Come on...you are falling into the same trap that most authors of very long stories do: Inflict as much pain/punishment/damage/whatever you can think of on the 'heroes' leaving them very little reason to go on.
Hermione, a werewolf...right, like father and father and sister...all in the family, I guess.
Hagrid dead...um, was that only one AK that hit him?
Lucius's twisted leaps of logic...he should be pushing up daisies.
And Cho...who really cares about the bint. Let her get eaten or something.
You've pretty much got all the 'outs' to eliminate all the damn melodrama and angst...use them already. It doesn't make a better story...it just shows your latent sadistic tendencies.
Oh, and really, even with the changes from cannon...Harry would NEVER stay put in a situation like this...he would have 'wolfed' out and led the charge.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
People get hurt in wars. Sometimes they even die. However, since you don't care for my story, at the top right corner of your screen there is a red button with a white X. May I suggest you use it. Thank you for your comments and have a nice day.
bookaholic_au posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 4:46pm
Metaphorical brownies!
Molten Chocolate babycakes
Makes 6 large and rich serves
Ingredients:
50 g butter
350g bittersweet chocolate (preferably with 70% cocoa solids)
4 large eggs
salt
150 g castor sugar
1 tsp vanilla extract
50g plain flour
Method:
1. Hair, hands and apron.
2. Get out utensils and measure ingredients, grease six muffin tins thoroughly, lining the bottom.
3. Preheat oven to 200 °C.
4. Melt chocolate and set aside to cool.
5. Beat eggs with a pinch of salt until frothy, and set aside.
6. Cream butter and sugar.
7. Gradually add egg mixture, and then vanilla to the butter and sugar.
8. Add flour, followed by chocolate.
9. Divide batter between the six dishes. If refrigerating, to so now.
10. Bake for 10 to 12 minutes until firm and dry on the surface. Cool slightly before placing on plates and serving with ice cream.
Does this count as feeding the author?
Great chapter, please update soon, I'm not sure I can stand the suspense.
callie posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 4:17pm
wow that was so jam packed!!!!!!!!!
it was just great!!!!
so who ended up hurt...
hargid(dead), fenir greyback (dead), Ginny (bitten but maybe not actually a werewolf cause of what neenie did), hermione (possibly a werewolf cause of her helping ginny), maya (bitten) who else? im sure i missed someone...
hmmm interesting very interesting
insertparagraph posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 3:36pm
Wow. Just...wow.
Anthony May posted a comment on Thursday 7th August 2008 6:44am
Ok, A cliff hanger on a story that you take months to update is just rude. I love the whole Danger series - you are awesome but I am disappointed with the rate you update this story. It's definitely worth it as you have given me hours of immense enjoyment - but it is hard to remember what is going on by the time you finally update. If you weren't so great I'd have given up. Here's to hoping you update soon!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
I wish that I could update more frequently, but I have little needs like eating and paying rent which require me to work for most of my day. By the time I get home, put my personal life into some semblance of order, and relax enough that I feel like writing, it is usually time for me to go to bed. I am sorry you consider me rude for writing the best story I can, and I will try with all my might not to leave this cliffhanger for more than a month.
karina82 posted a comment on Tuesday 5th August 2008 5:28pm
oh no, not hagrid.
who was that man beckoning to hermione?
Blocker posted a comment on Wednesday 30th July 2008 1:07pm
NO!!!
How could you?!?
Its so sad. Hagrid never did anything to anyone.
-mumbles- meanest author ever
Grrr.
Hurry with then next one?
twilightxpanic posted a comment on Tuesday 29th July 2008 3:34pm
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
ahhhhhhhhh! noo. so sad! boohoohoohoo.
i cannot wait for the next chapter! the story is amazing!
callie posted a comment on Monday 28th July 2008 7:40pm
NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Who is it????????
MORE! SOON! please?
Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Monday 28th July 2008 1:56am
Oh, poor Hagrid. That's so sad, and what happened to the girls?? Not a very fun chapter, overall, but a good one nonetheless. The next one ought to be pretty tense. I'm looking forward to it. Thanks for writing!
Jay
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 9:43pm
This was such a sad chapter. I was worried from the time when you began it with him running but I didn't expect it to be that when it finished. I liked the use of Pack instincts to stop Harry from following.
Loved the fact that Luna watches Draco's colours. Great play stuff between the cubs.
You killed him! You really did didn't you? This is going to be a very sad story if they don't start beating Voldie soon. Fantastic chapter. More please.
AnnaTigg posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 7:58pm
Okay, so you are wonderful, because you updated, and naturally that's utterly brilliant. (Mental happy dance was performed as soon as I saw there was a new chapter). On the other hand, though, you leave us with this cliffie, and also - Hagrid!! And Hermione!! Sleep not the year's first night of care, indeed...I truly hope you plan to update soon so as not to prolong this suspense!
Milarqui posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 6:29pm
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU KILL HAGRID????? HE WAS BY FAR ONE OF THE BEST CHARACTERS IN THE STORY!!!! AND A PACK FRIEND, TOO!!!!!! WHY, WHY??????
Lynn Terald posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 4:57pm
UPDATE!!!!!*runs around screaming and flailing* UPDATE!!!!
I have been reading back over your other stories and I have notice several things. You have things very well planned out, you can spin events in either a very comical or serious way as fits the story, and you consistently make me want to rip my hair out with the things you do to these charaters.
All in all, you are one of the more fantastic and brilliant fanfic authors that I have run across and I would wait for for your chapters as long as I waited for J.Ks books to come out.
UPDATE!!!!!*runs around screaming and flailing* UPDATE!!!!
Lynn Terald posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 4:34am