sunrisesunset posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 3:31pm

Ouch. The "BYOT" warning at the beginning made me very apprehensive, and then the last line sealed the deal. A consequence of making us feel so much about your characters is that we hate to see them go. Especially like this. I will say that you faked me out a bit with Brian's incident; I thought that he wasn't going to make it.

Somehow, I feel like this is only the first death of several - hopefully not too many more. Or any more. It's no fun when bad things happen to good people... but they happen nonetheless.

Your writing style is consistently dramatic, emotional, and unpredictable. Please update again soon - I really want to see everybody's reaction. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Musta posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 5:46am

BYOT indeed. I STILL can't believe you did that.

Quite.

Huor posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 5:06am

Oh, I wasn't expecting that. I'm guessing that the pendants didn't activate to warn that the girls were in danger because Malfoy swore to do whatever is in his power to protect them from harm. Nasty trick by Malfoy, turning that oath back against Lupin. I suppose that the next part of the plan would be to put himself in a position where he has no power to protect them.

Hopefully the Pack will finally learn to never trust Dudley.

Oh, my. I just re-read the chapter where the rituals of purification where brought up, and mentioning Dudley here has made me realize he's a natural candidate to try that. Would he have to kill Harry, too, or is killing half-blood relatives not required?

takon65 posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 4:19am

NOooooooooooooo!!! Not Hagrid! Hopefully you'll let Fang take a chunk out of thier backsides..please?

Summerkins posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 3:13am

-wibbles- HAGRID NOOOOOO

bdjsfgjkl What happened to Hermione? Who was that man? The girls didn't kill him did they? Cause that would be REALLY bad. -general flailing-

Treecat posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 2:06am

Hagriiiiid...
Noooo...
Don't kill him! We love him!
Great chapter, as always, some beautiful parts, as well as funny.
Thank you.

kendiara posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 1:36am

Well thats a poopy thing to wake up to....

And just wrong really really wrong...

tommy198 posted a comment on Friday 18th July 2008 5:28am

Can't wait to see what happens to Cho. The more evil the better...

P.s wouldn't it make more sense calling the chapters year 5 part 2 or year 5/2 or something ike that rather than arc 6?

millie johanson posted a comment on Sunday 13th July 2008 5:51pm

Hello, I love your ideas for these stories and I hope you write more Pleaseeeeeeeeeee soon I have been waiting like all your other readers.

Keep up the good works

Miss Millie

LoneWolf282 posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2008 10:13am

One of the most interesting angles I've seen used since I started reading FanFic! Already reread the series since the last update, and am waiting patiently for the next one.

Mulch Diggums posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2008 4:56am

Oh great, you've given me another musical to become obsessed with. :-) Sadly, I can't find it on DVD, just YouTube.

gtray123 posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2008 9:27pm

Why,

First off just lwt me say its been a while and I had to go back and review some of the previous chapters. Now on to the review. I like this chapter, the interaction of the characters and the dialouge is well placed and intriguing. However, it seems as if the flow wasn't quite there. Maybe it's because its been so long but somwthing just seemed off (although that could be due to a lack of action in this chapter as well). I can't wait for the next update and just want you to know if you keep writing I'll keep reading. 'til next time

millie johanson posted a comment on Sunday 8th June 2008 3:05pm

Hello, I love your stories it's been awhile so I am rereading this one. Keep up the writing and good luck. Pleaseeeeeee write more.

Miss Millie

Graup posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 12:21pm

You have a quick wit and an industrial-sized imagination for all of the plots and twists you have hatched here.

I could call you more evil than Voldemort due to the amount of trouble surrounds your heroes and heroines. He never went to some of the lengths you have used to torture these good people.

However, comparing you to Voldemort isn't quite right either, because the characters you have created are alive and functioning quite well.

Good on you for your fantastic imagination, your "non-borrowed" ideas, and the pace you set.

Thanks for sharing your story.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 18th May 2008 11:12pm

LOL at the evil twin idea. Got to love the way Hermione's mind is always working and now she's sharing her thoughts with Ron. Loved the idea of Meghan in that house and it getting lonely. Excellent revenge on Cho at the end but I suspect JKR never would have used it as it requires knowledge of why 30 pieces of silver would be a problem for Cho. Great chapter. So nice to see this continued. More please.

kutekess posted a comment on Sunday 18th May 2008 7:35am

I hate to sound stupid, as i'm sure there is some refrence but I don't understand what they did too Cho: I'm just guessing something to do with Romans

bobthepurple posted a comment on Thursday 15th May 2008 3:12pm

This story has been one of the most effectively written character driven pieces I've read in a while. Good job, if only you'd crank out faster...

Puck1 posted a comment on Tuesday 13th May 2008 12:02pm

Should I be scared now? j/k. Great job so far. It took me a few seconds to get the silver reference...I've not read a Bible in a while. Could Peeves prank someone, please?

Viv posted a comment on Wednesday 7th May 2008 5:21pm

Interesting and enjoyable as always. I wonder how Voldemort's plan will pan out...What is behind Cho's necklace? Will the Den be safe? So many questions.

I'm still not sure what is up with Amanda. Why is Luna playing this game with her? It seems unfair to toy with Draco's affections without his knowledge, and entirely out of character.

Thanks for another great chapter! I look forward to the next.

Matilda posted a comment on Wednesday 7th May 2008 11:36am

I liked it, but I'm a little impatient for some of the mysteries to be solved. I mean, I liked the new mystery about Hestia and her shadow, and I'm interested in what's going to happen to Cho, but I hope we're going to find out something soon about Amanda, the sword of decision, the prophecy, or anything really. I'm especially interested in the sword of decision. Anyway, I don't mean to be critical, because I really did like the chapter and I love the dangerverse. And believe me, I completely understand being busy and not having a lot of time. I love updates, but I'm so impressed you've managed to write so much already that you won't hear me complainig about waiting!