Facing Danger

Joyce Monschein posted a comment on Monday 29th October 2007 12:35pm

I've certainly been enjoying the Dangerverse. I started re-reading the stories about 2 weeks ago. The only thing missing is that last chapter......

Joyce

Rasgara posted a comment on Thursday 25th October 2007 5:15am

awesome. i love what you did for marcus by having sirius write a book about him. i cant wait for more.
smileys,
Rasgara

Tumshie posted a comment on Thursday 25th October 2007 2:51am

I have just found your wonderful stories and would like to say a big thank you for sharing them with us.

The only thing is that now I've caught up with your main story I'll have to wait in anticipation for your next update.

Once again thank you for your writing.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 9:26am

Wow great chapter.

I think that it was very un "Harry like" to have a plan that seemed to guarantee Umbridges death quite so assuredly. She is a foul toad of a woman and had done some terrible things but they surely must have realised that Voldemort would have killed her. To use her in the plan that way was to send her to her death.

I almost feel as though you devalued the death of Andromeda Tonks by having it as an after thought to justify the death of Umbridge.

Saying all that though, I still liked the chapter. Especially the bit about Valentina Jett writing childrens novels about Marcus. What a wonderful way for a parent to immortalise a child.

I wonder how much more grieving you going to do with some of the characters as I know in a way this was a victory I still feel as though the pack should have come together more. I'm curious as to whether there is going to be some bitter feeling between Letha and Danger about her magic not protecting Marcus. Also the constant theme of possible jealously between the two that Letha can have kids born of her body and Danger can't. Will you bring that up?

Whats happening with Danger, is she OK or just recovering from one of her extended other worldly power sessions?

As every, thanks for writing and I can't wait for more!
Monkey

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 8:50am

Wow! Great chapter. Loved the bits with James and Lilly. As I've read most of the other DV stories where the Potter's come back and join the Pack I kind of got confused as to how they would relate to Letha and the rest. Just to clarify back story, they went to Hogwarts with her so knew her quite well?

On one hand killing Marcus was very sad and mean considering he was an unborn baby. On the other though it was a bit of a cop out really as we never knew the character, he was just a name.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 8:15am

Great chapter! Really mean ending, but I'm not sure you'd follow cannon so faithfully and kill Sirius considering how AU the Dangerverse is. At the same time you could say that it would be the think your fan's would least expect because its what Rowling did!

Nice link to Book 7 and the Deathly Hallows.

As every, thanks for writing!
Monkey

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 4:56am

YAY Sirius Lived!! poor marcus at least lilly and james will take care of him. Can't wait to see how Harry suckers old moldy. Time to read the next chapter! (yes i got to this one a bit late)

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Monday 22nd October 2007 12:28am

Yay for new chapters! Huzzah! That was a good trick, removing Harry's memories to trick Voldemort. I'm really curious about Draco's situation and what Luna is up to. Another update in October would be fantastic, but I could hardly complain if it took longer than that. Thanks for writing!
Jay

Stephenie posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 9:37pm

Great Story

To those out there who don’t know, Amanda is a fifth year Ravenclaw who is in the DA. Her last name is Smythe and she is becoming very attractive to Draco, (see the chapher when Umbridge moos and after Harry and Ginny get together and he sees them on the Quidditch pitch)

She is also the daughter (from The Only One of Mine by James Jago of Trulasotar Fanfiction archive) of Alexander Slytherin aka Smythe and his wife Anne.

hahaheeheehaha posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 7:16pm

aww harrikins, draco nd neenie denning together just like when they were younger :P i hope arthurs ok! he will be wont he? *glares* who's amanda? i recognise the name. i thought she was one of the ravenclaws or sumthing, btu theyre brenna, margaret, sophia and rowena. hm. update soon!

Maddie Potter posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 6:22pm

You are great! ILU <3

I didn't get what Sirius wrote... I thought it was James, and then Harry... but that didn't make sense. So I'm very confused DX

Looking forward to the next update!

Prongsie posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 4:53pm

Great chapter! Loved the "Let's trick Voldemort"part, the evil toadie didn't know what hit him. And Valentina Jett... *big hug* I love Sirius being all dad-like. Poor him, and Aletha and Pearl. But about Amanda: first, isn't Beauvoi the house from which the Sword came? And second: how did she get Padfoot to write that story down? A spell or something? If not, there would've been a conversation, right? And how did she get inside the guestsuite? Wasn't there a password or something?

I love the Amanda-storyline, I really do, but... I love Luna even more. Erm, I know I don't write this, but... Could you be kind to Luna? She IS Draco's girlfriend (has been for a while now), and I don't want to lose her and their relationship, it's too rare. Thanks anyway :)

Hugs and kisses,

Prongsie

stargirl404 posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 11:57am

Thanks a lot for updating! Loved it and can't to find out what Luna says to Amanda.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 10:31am

one of the more enjoyable chapters in the series, made extra sweet by the temporal proximity to the last release and the oh so sweet comeuppance of Dolores toad woman.

nice to have dumblie put the truth spell on fudge with everyone watching.

thanks

Tim Sullivan posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 10:28am

I know I would like it if you got it done by NaNo...as I'm going to be a bit busy with my own NaNo, and I won't have time to delve much into fanfic reading.

callie posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 10:08am

yes! umbridge is dead!!!

hahaa!!!

sooooooooo whats next?

liquidfyre posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 8:06am

good story so far i wouldna thought id like a series like this so much but i have and intent to keep reading it

you should try to work in a flying penguin at least once though yep yep

By Anne B. Walsh

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