NickyFox13 posted a comment on Friday 5th October 2007 3:47pm

Let's see...I want to apologize for not getting this review in earlier.

The cliffie is evil, but knowing you, the next chapter will be worth the wait.

I can't wait to see how you handle the Battle at the Department of Mysteries. It was intense in [i]OotP[/i] so only time will tell to see how amazingly you will write it.

On the deaths...it's hard to say, seeing as most of the readers are attatched to them. There's Remus who dies, Fred, Mad-Eye, Hedwig...But definately, death may be hard, but it makes good drama to be truthful.

*sheepish grin*

Definately, you should keep Hedwig dead, as well as Mad-Eye, but Remus not so much. I've grown attached to him ever since I started reading the Dangerverse.

Then there's the deal with Tonks having Remus' kid in 'Deathly Hallows'. Maybe Danger could have Remus' kid and Tonks could go off with Charlie? Or you could have that same plotline with Tonks and Charlie?

Oh, I'm not sure, since this is your story.






Last thing: I absolutely love this story. You have created a brilliant series of AU stories with great twists, turns and three dimensional original characters.

Update soon, por favor.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 12th September 2007 5:17am

You've got to feel so sorry for Harry. You write Winky brilliantly, so many people can't get the hang of House-Elf speech but you do it really well. Eeeek! at that ending. Evil evil cliffhanger but excellent too. What did you do to Mr Weasley? Great stuff. More please.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 11th September 2007 3:44pm

Now that's a most excellent cliffie. I liked the way this chapter built it's suspense from start to finish with little "teasers" along the way to keep you reading through it. I wonder if Dolores (yeah, it's a mis-spelling of her first name, but the meaning of the name fits so well) really knows who/what she's dealing with? It'll be amusing if/when she finds out and this reader, bloodthirsty barbarian that I am, would love to see her being one of the ones to die, if she's not dead already - though I'd love to see her and Fudge die of apoplexy when they see that Voldemort is indeed back and their quite little fiction isn't safe any more, if it ever was. I'd rather Mr. Weaseley doesn't die and if his wife is to die, I'd like to see it be doing something really beneficial, like taking out Lucius and/or one or more of the Lestranges. Beyond that, I really don't want any of the Light side to die, but I know that's not realistic. I would ask that none of the Pack nor Pride die; severe wounds are recoverable, death isn't.

Tabitha Potter posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 11:17pm

Please please please don't me go through Sirius's death again. I think I may actually break down if you do. save the pack and pride, and Arthur and molly. and I'll be happy. Save the twins if you can :)

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 10:52pm

good chapter but but why not just have fawkes flash him back to hogwarts?

callie posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 6:14pm

that was sooooooooo good
i don't want anyone to die
that would just be too sad
:(

can't wait for the next update

DarQuing posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 1:29pm

Umm, is nobody dieing an option? *puppy-dog eyes*

Definitely not the Pack or anybody in the Pride.

twilightxpanic posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 10:22am

Ahhhhhhhh! Just ahhhhhhhh! Ahhhh. ahaha ok ok enough of that. It's just soo exciting I cannot wiat for the battle sequence and the rest of the pack and pride to show up and kick some death eater/voldiemoldie assssss. Wooooohoooooooo. Yea!

LoneWolfe posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 10:07am

Oh my. We're really in it now, aren't we. I had a couple of suspicions that Crouch was acting a bit ... off - now I know why! Nice cliffy (again), you're leaving us all on the edge of our seats here.

As far as votes for who should/shouldn't die... all the power is yours. I'd rather be surprised.

Great chapter, as always, and I can't wait for the next chapter (but no pressure, because I'll wait as long as needed)!

sejones posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 8:49am

NNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Don't kill anyone please! That extreme plead out of my system, please don't kill Sirius or anyone in the Pack or Pride. I could deal with the loss of a Weasley or a professor or two. Another death I could envision producing plenty of angst is that of Aletha and Sirius's unborn child. It would also leave the numbers in the Pack and Pride even (unless you intend the new child to step into the hole that Draco's death will leave, though I sincerely hope that his death will just be a subterfuge to protect him or get a spy into the Death Eaters). I've enjoyed this story and my only wish is that you could update more often, but please don't sacrifice quantity for quality. Sara

ps. Please don't kill Sirius!

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 8:28am

Wow! Barty Crouch Snr must really be Barty Crouch Jnr. So very, very superb. I didn't even guess it at all but I think its difficult to suspect characters when reading a story that is written like Fanfic is.

I'm really quite worried over who your going to kill, but I'm hoping none of the pack or pride because of the wedding scene Danger dreamed all the way back in the first fic.

Great chapter though, can't wait for the next bit.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 8:21am

How bout a 180 from every other stories I read about the vail? Have Sirius force Bellatrix through it instead of the other way around?

Aberbadger posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 7:08am

no weaselys, pride or pack, at least 1 de, preferably bella, otherwise upo to you

.x.Ellz.x. posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 5:30am

Loving the story as always but one thing about who dies. YOU CANNOT MAKE ME GO THROUGH SIRIUS DYING AGAIN. PLEASE.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 1:54am

BaDoM next eh? Multiple Deaths? and We get to vote? I can't imagine the power hehehe lets see who has to die.... Umbridge (I just don't like her) umm not sure who else. I would rather be suprised.


Rob

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 12:35am

Mean, mean, cliffy! Great chapter though. Things are really moving again. As long as Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny make it you can kill whoever you want. Especially if they're death eaters. Thanks for writing!

hjdevnull posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 10:52pm

Man, when you decide to have it all hit the fan, you don't mess around, do you? =)

Great chapter. You've really been churning them out for the past month or two, this has been great. I like being spoiled. =) You've ratcheted up the tension a great deal, especially as we know we've reached a critical point in the canon. It really is that much more the cliffhanger for that reason alone -- you've never deviated that far from canon, all things considered. Makes me nervous, especially with the mention of Valentina Jett not writing anymore.

Great plot twist with the spy, by the way. I didn't see that one coming, and usually I'm good at seeing those things.

amulder posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 9:46pm

Oooh, what fun.

But a bit of explanation as to why Harry didn't think to leave with Fawkes would be good. Was the room too small? Was he preoccupied? I know it was important to the plot for him to save Arthur, but it seems to be a tiny loop hole.

Bit of a long tense chapter, but now I sense a roller-coaster about to appear. .. and I like it!

Barty crouch. Hmm. Didn't expect that either, which is a good one. Hmm.

thanks for sharing.
It's a great read.

...art

Dave Harris posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 9:34pm

Has there been a slight change of perspective in the last couple of chapters? The adults seem to be referred to as "Mr Moony" and "Mrs Danger" etc a lot more in these chapters.

Prongsie posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 8:54pm

Okay, now I see what you meant with the whole Harry-debacle when he dreamt of the spy, and knew his voice, but couldn't link it to the person himself. Though I do feel sorry for Crouch, as that's, what, the third time he's been used so to speak by the Dark? As a matter of fact, where IS he? Is he one of the dead guys during the battle? Hmmmm, am trying to decide whether that would annoy me, please me or leave me rather indifferent. I mean, the guy has had an enormous turn-around in this (might I add wonderful) story, what with him backing Dumbledore on pretty much everything, taking care of Kreacher,... Kreacher! Maybe that's how he got to be 'used'! His son got out, so he's part of the family as well, and therefor Kreacher wouldn't have any trouble with following his orders... Aha! And I'm probably rambling on in a completely inane way, but hey, that's what your story makes me do. *sticks out tongue* About the 'people dying' part: I don't like it, but I see why you have to (aren't I the nicest and most understanding gal you've ever met?). So, I'm thinking maybe Crouch, Lucius Malfoy as a definite 'yeah! Go get him!', and maybe someone who's accidentally managed to stumble upon the group of Pack and Pride leaving Hogwarts to go and help Harry (a student? Amanda!). Just wanted to put my thougts in here, who knows, you might even read them :). Anyway, thanks for writing and posting. I'm rather certain I'll die happily (or might be able to die happily) when the last chapter of FD has been posted. And that thought almost makes me cry. I mean, c'mon, the Danger-AU-verse (the original AU-verse of course, not the AU-AU-verse) ending? Finished? Not happening in my mind, but I see why you'd hae to. *sighs* I'll just keep on enjoying the ride, as we've still got 2 years and a couple of months to go through until the official ending. Yessssssss...

Toodles!