Minerva posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 8:37pm

please, just don't kill anybody from the pack/pride, the 7th book was depressing enough (I mean, Remus and Fred!, you can't kill a twin, it's just not right, if you know what I mean)

Maddie Potter posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 7:38pm

DO NOT KILL ANY OF THE PACK/PRIDE OR I WILL CRY SO HARD YOU WILL FEEL IT ALL THE WAY OVER THE OCEAN.

Thank-you for updating. And what a lovely update. I'm already getting chills thinking of what is to come D:

<3 Maddie.

Phil Boswell posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 6:14pm

Nicely done. I was a bit caught out by the update (having started re-reading from the beginning, I'm only part-way through DwD) but it's more than welcome.

In the interests of preserving my nitpicking credentials, however, I should point out that "puissant" is almost certainly not the correct word in that context: "pertinent" is possibly a better word.

karina82 posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 5:12pm

cool chapter.
oh no the battle is upon us. please please don't kill anyone in the pack or pride. and please don't kill the weasley patriarchs and the weasley twins.
oh and if,i do mean if, you kill of snape he better go out in a blaze of glory. but i do hope he lives.

Chunky posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 4:55pm

Simple request - don't kill Ginny.

... and keep writing. It's rather fascinating.

--Chunky

Sherylyn posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 4:52pm

Well, obviously, the most votes for deaths (other than Voldie's, of course) will be for Umbitch's ;-) I'm not too opposed to losing Crouch, either, even if he is *supposed* to be one of the good guys. Of course, you're probably wanting to off people who are more "important", but I think you oughta show how all the most beloved characters can ALL have a happily-ever-after. I mean, you're already AU from canon, so you should definitely do *that* part AU too. *nods definitively* See, always good to ask ;-)

And thanks for the quicker update -- after last chapter, I've been holding my breath half the time ;-)

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 3:54pm

Ohayo. I'm still trapped in hardcore denial over Sirius, Moony, and Tonks. So. Please, please, please don't kill them off. I will cry. Lots. I wailed in the theatre when I saw OotP. I don't think I can take another death of that calibre. Great chatper, by the way, heh. I actually really liked it. Not that I don't love the other chapters, because I do. Anyway, Harry is off to be the Alpha, the Chosen One, and my hero! Just kidding, see you next chapter! Cheers.

~Ivy

rejeimha1 posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 3:08pm

Okay, you're going to have to tell me where you hinted that Crouch was really Christopher whoever, cause I didn't see that coming at all.

I liked the action of this chapter, and Harry seemed to finally through off that cripling self-doubt that I always find so annoying in a character who seems to be so strong. Well, it wasn't a moment too soon, for the battle is coming and I can't wait to see how you do it.

I vote that you kill off Snape just so I can gain some respect for the HP universe back after reading DH. If your Harry is going to have that mysterios piece of Voldemort's soul attached to him then the sooner you kill him, and therefore the piece of soul, the better.

Bringing him back to life now would definatly be a huge bit of psychological warfare against the DE's in the coming years. In fact, if my interpretation of things is correct, so long as Voldemort is alive Harry can keep coming back to life thanks to the "blood of a foe" step in that ritual. Just imagine how paniced that would make old Tommy boy, no matter how many times he succeeds in killing the one person who can kill him that one person just won't stay dead and will continue to come back to fight some more. It would just drive the guy insane. Just a thought.

Have fun writing the rest.

rejeimha

BecauseISaidSo posted a comment on Wednesday 5th September 2007 9:43pm

great chapter, I can't wait to see them save Harry. Because Harry is no longer wareing the locket that means that he isn't blood-bonded with Remus right? Will Remus and Danger find a way to have children, like in one of your other storys? I'm just wondering becuase in the summary it says babies and not a baby. But I guess that could be about Charlie and Tonks or Bill and Fleur, either way, I really looking forward to the next chapter.

NickyFox13 posted a comment on Wednesday 5th September 2007 1:04pm

There is the mandatory "Dangerverse rocks, the twists and turns are amazing, I love your creativity, you rock in general, update soon..." part of the review.

The only thing I am worried about is Sirius. You managed to twist the part of canon where Sirius escapes out of Azkaban in book three and managed to have Remus, Aletha and Danger to break Sirius out of jail, which is not bad, let me assure you.

...It's JKR's canon I am worried about. He dies this year as everybody who's read OotP knows, and it would be very cruel and unusual to kill him when he is married to Aletha, who is pregnant with not even born baby Marcus. There's no need to forget Meghan, who happens to be twelve. So killing him is pure evil with the canon you have so greatly created.

I think it would make a wonderfully interesting (not to mention a bit evil) plot twist to see not only how Harry reacts to Sirius' death but the Pack and Pride.

I think, yes, you should kill him and then, after sixth or seventh year, maybe even earlier if you please, (later if you feel evil), Harry, the rest of the Pack and Pride (you can include anyone else to help if you would like) bring him out of the Veil. The Pride got Neville's parents back from permanent insanity, why could they not bring back Sirius from the Veil? It would be hard to sound plausible, but it's a worth a try to come up with a good reason as to how he gets back.

Yes, in that long bunch of paragraphs, I explained what I'd like to see in your story, but it is up to you what you choose to do in the rest of the series, as it IS your story after all.

I want to end with "You rock!" and "Update soon!"

hjdevnull posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2007 12:24am

Intense chapter. Very well-written and moved at a great pace. Still, you know you've gone majorly AU when Ron Weasley is the voice of reason in crisis. =)

Can't wait to see what happens next. This chapter came out a lot sooner than I thought it would -- here's to hoping that the muse and the free time to write continue to grace your presence.

windwolf1314 posted a comment on Monday 3rd September 2007 4:21am

YES!!!! the wicked witchs is gone(by this i of course mean Cho)

karina82 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 4:44pm

dang it, this chapter just had to end on a angsty point.
please updated soon.

Alex Tremaine posted a comment on Friday 31st August 2007 11:34am

Let's see.

I could spend a thousand words trying to tell you just how much I like your Dangerverse, and how the twists and turns of the saga equal or exceed the writings of almost everyone I read on a regular basis, and that only the Sunrise/set over Britain series is higher in my favorite list.

Or, I could stop writing things you have to take the time to read and let you get back to amazing me some more.

Thanks for the read.

stargirl404 posted a comment on Friday 31st August 2007 2:33am

Gosh, it's getting interesting! I'm looking forward to when Ron and Hermione get together, lol. Please update soon!

Prongsie posted a comment on Thursday 30th August 2007 6:51am

Okay, an additional review (go me!): I don't know whether you know the song, but since you use songs so often... You might like to listen to 'Little Joanna' from McFly. Why? There's a part of the lyrics that goes like this: 'And I'm starting to believe that danger's never near, when Joanna is here'. Now, tricky question: who do we know who's called Joanna? Or Joanne, for that matter? And an even trickier question (going for gold here): who do we know that goes by the nickname of Danger? :)
I noticed it 2 minutes ago, and thought it was too good to hold back. Hope you liked it!

Grtz

insertparagraph posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 9:04am

o.O

Oh, BLOODY hell. PLEASE tell us Chapter 22 will be posted soon.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 8:44am

You're evil you are! Truly evil, leaving us with a cliff hanger like that!

Loved that Harry held so many of them off as well. The fact that the room of requirements password was; Thank you everyone really interested me. Was that alluding to thanking all the founders, or thanking everyone in the room!

Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Monkey

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 7:11am

LOL at the DA House with a Manticore mascot. The whole DA scene was brilliant, especially the Lena jokes. That final scene between Minerva and Meghan was great. I'm guessing they took the wrong chains when they shared it so Ginny has Harry's. Wonderful stuff. More please. That spell is positively evil.

LoneWolfe posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 4:13am

AAAARGH!!! You are an evil evil person... such a cliffhanger!

Excellently written, as always, and of course I can't wait to see what happens next. Love the combination of elements from the movie and the book. I really want to see Umbridge go down in flames!