By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
Sherylyn posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 5:16pm
Oh. good. heck. Umbitch is horrible in canon, but I think you've shown even more of her -- although I do think her actions in your story aren't outside of her character by ANY means. Poor Harry, though... and I *knew* they weren't careful enough w/those pendants earlier. Gah. Not only poor Harry, but poor Ginny, too, w/the guilt she'll feel over that.
I do know how Real Life takes precedence and how much It demands of us... but I also hope that the next chapter might come about pretty quickly, so we can see how the Pack and the Pride handle all this!
Excellent, brilliant job as always! :-)
twilightxpanic posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 2:23pm
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! the suspense will be killing me softly, killing me softly with [it's] words, ahahahaha no. Please please please have Chapter 22 soon! I sooooo cannot wait to see what happens.
norilou posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 2:09pm
I was very confused while reading this. You jumped scenes so fast it took me a while to figure out what was going on. I felt like you had left out whole paragraphs of action and dialog. What is there is very good, but could have been better if the changes in POV and action were not so abrupt.
Tabitha Potter posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 11:47am
OMG!!!! Harry!!!!! nooo!!! I didn't think you could make me hate Umbitch more then i did after reading the book and seeing the movie, cause when she hit Harry, then was gunna crucio him, I swear I wanted to leap into the screen and smash her head against a wall till she fainted. But this, honestly, I hate her enough to Crucio her ass then get her kissed be a dementor (I don't believe in using the AK). Well done on making your story so good that I'm actually emotionally invested in it, and damn you for making harry go through that. What is it with writers and making their characters go through hell and back for nothing but plot!! I love love love all the shippage moments in your stories, they're beautiful.
Thanks for updating
CaffeineAddict posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 8:40am
that is the most evil of all cliff hangers!
great chapter lol.
Deborahsu posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 7:31am
Where's Harry?? When will they find him??? What kind of slowly painful death will Umbridge suffer before they lock her in Azkaban (yeah, I know that won't work! LOL!)????
Coming soon, I hope!
Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 6:16am
Umbridge caught him? Not fair! There is something I would like to see.... another chapter! This story just keeps getting better and better and waiting for updates is almost as mean as what toad woman is doing to Harry. If Ginny has Harry's locket does that mean that she has lupus and Harry lost the protection?
Anne B. Walsh replied:
No, Ginny won't have lupus, because it's not her blood in the locket with Remus'. But yes, Harry has lost his protection.
csktech posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 2:36am
What an excellent birthday present for me... Keep rocking on this one.
Kyle
amulder posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 9:45pm
Bloody cliffhangers. Argh.
One ripsnorting rollercoaster of a chapter here, Anne. Wow.
trouble trouble trouble.
thanks for sharing. I was _VERY_ puzzled though, at Harry's sudden loss of confidence.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
As you should have been. Go look up the spell that was used directly beforehand.
Maddie Potter posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 6:27pm
Oh My Gods.
That was probably the most shocking twist you have given us, Anne. It was so far from the book, yet not far enough to be un-canon-esque... if you get what I mean at all, I'd be happy.
What is going to happen to Harry? Don't keep me in suspense!
How did you like DH? Happy, sad, suprised, disappointed?
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Suspense? Me? Perish the thought!
DH had its good moments and its okay moments. I was happy enough with it as a finish to canon, and there's a lot of new info there for me to use.
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 5:46pm
AHAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! How could you leave it there???!!! NOOOOOOOO. Okay, so that was a really good chapter, but eurgh. She's horrible. Awful. Really, really, really awful. Wow. The fallout from this will be superb. Yes, I can't wait to see what happens next. You'll let us know soon, right (makes puppy eyes)????
Great job as always!
Cassie
Prongsie posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 5:12pm
You're brilliant. Abso-bloody-lutely brilliant. *sighs* To be able to write like that... Brilliant. And the great thing with you is the fact that your characters are able to fail, because they know they'll have backup. Congratulations, you've managed to create humans! :) Loved it.
redjacobson posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 4:32pm
wow! I think the Toad has just made a major mistake! More soon please?
red
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 4:20pm
Um, evil cliffie must be destroyed
Changer posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 3:24pm
ACCCCCK!
Hopefully the next part appears sooon! Love that the pace is picking up!
Elf Toshiba posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 3:02pm
Thank you! Thank you!! This is the best birthday present!
David13 posted a comment on Sunday 26th August 2007 2:52pm
Another great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.
The only problem I have is that it is always Harry acting his age and making mistakes, pouting and being angry with himself. Such as after the second battle in the DA. None of the other kid ever seem to have that problem, well besides Megan and Graham's escape. The other kids always seem to be much more mature making more adult decisions and looking down on Harry for acting like a kid. Personally that doesn't seem right, they have all been brought up together why is it that Harry continues to make mistakes and the others don't suffer the same affliction.
Maybe I'm wrong and just taking it out of context, or that Harry's mistakes over shadow the mistakes of the others, I don't know but I do know that I can't wait to see what happens next.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
We see more of Harry's mistakes, because we also see more of his high points, when he's amazing. However, I will address this in future chapters. Thanks for the comment!
Lostchyld posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 5:12am
I might have to write a short titled "Missing Danger" if you don't post a new chapter soon.
Cheers.
-Caet
Amarin Rose posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 8:06am
I've spent the past week reading the main Dangerverse, and I've enjoyed it so much I didn't take time out to write a review, sorry. But this is an amazing universe you've created, and I loved how even giving canon this twist doesn't get rid of all the problems, it just makes it easier for the characters to deal with them. I do hope nothing too bad happens to Draco and Luna - and that Draco doesn't end up accidentally getting kissed by Amanda where Luna sees - but I have faith that you'll fix everything. Can't wait for the next chapter!
haylared posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 4:08am