By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
hannah posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 3:42pm
Ginny and harry make me laugh! So did Harry trying to talk to Hermione...that was priceless!!
twilightxpanic posted a comment on Sunday 22nd July 2007 6:38pm
That last line sounds so foreboding. I can't wait to see what she has planned. :D
booklover posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 9:54pm
i love this series this is y first review but i have read every book write more!!!! Draco must live!!!!!
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 4:56am
Great chapter
MPF
xohorsegal752ox posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 1:31am
Brilliant as always.
I egarly await your next update.
This is a review for chapters 18-20 by the way becasue Ive been camping for the last 5 ddays and havent had access to the internet.
Keep up the good work!!
~L-Dawg <33
Faith1 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 10:05am
aHH!!!!!!! Meh! Meh!! I love Meh!!!!memememememehh!!!! MWAHAHAHA! =]. Also, what does she mean 'with him, we have the world' ? Guessing... she wants to use him like Scrimageour wanted to at the end of the 6th book? "You didn’t start the fight," she said. "But you’re going to finish it." ( I swear, I saw the you didn't start the fi- and I thought it was gonna go into ' We didn't start the fire, it was always burning since the world's been turning...' lol =]) It's Cho, isn't it? Goddess i hate that girl.
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 6:38am
Such a great chapter! That has to be one of the best fanfic pranks ever!
Gotta love Draco's lines: "And now I’m back where I didn’t want to be, thank you very much, oh marvelous brain. One of these days I’m taking an eggbeater to you"; and "I suppose if our hearts listened to reason, we wouldn’t have literature."
Really like the stuff your setting up with Umbridge finding out about the DA. Its all happening fast now.
Liked Neville's reaction to the Azkaban breakout, all of there reactions seemed so real. Only criticism would be how your link from the opening scene to them all being in the Den and thinking about the escape seemed to jump to much, and you waited to long with Neville before you let us know what had happened, its still great though.
Really loved how Draco doesn't know what he can do to stop Luna loving him when he has an attraction to that Amanda Smythe. I think its clever how your setting up the vision to possibly come true.
Thanks for writing. We're being spoilt by you!
Monkey
Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 6:28am
hehehe Poor umbridge! I loved it dancing and singing toilets with a Umbridge hat!
nice!
Rob
Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 12:09am
You're killing me here! I keep thinking Umbridge is finally going to find Harry, and it doesn't happen. I'm looking forward to that. Good chapter though. I liked the interaction between Ron and Hermione. And of course the bit with the toilets was pretty funny. Thanks for writing!
pnthrgrl343 posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 11:26pm
Hahahaha.
That was great. =) Can't wait to see if the informant is still Marietta, and what happens at the DA meeting, and all the rest. =)
amulder posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 9:40pm
"La la la not LISTENING",
;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-)
You keep teasing and pleasing us with these lovely chapters. Thank-you, Anne, for this wonderful tale.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 6:59pm
Do I want to know what DH means? Oh, Deathly Hallows. Yes, I will, and I'll tell you how much I enjoyed it, as well. And how much I love your stories, so you'll keep writing them.
Maddie Potter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 6:47pm
Oh my, I am so exited about DH! <3
The toilets were classic XD And the song was perfect, but I really don't get the reference to Egyptians...
The scene with Sirius and Aletha was really sweet. I love those two.
I was a bit confused about the escaping prisoners bit... I didn't get what was going on until you actually spelled it out. Maybe I'm just slow XD
And thank-you so much, you have been wonderful with updating lately, and I really wanted to say thank-you.
It's actually been helping me. Looking forward to your updates takes my mind off other things. Thank-you again.
<3
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 6:35pm
Oh wow. I can't believe you updated again! I think you met my little sister when you wrote Amanda - she uses "Meh!" in exactly the same way. Nice musical interlude and an excellent prank. Despite being spoiled by so many updates all week, I can only beg for more as this chapter left me so hungry for the next installment. Wonderful stuff. More please & enjoy DH!
m4rk6 posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 6:11pm
Wow, I'm impressed, your muse must be working overtime. Can't wait to meet the informant.
Don Parsons posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 4:04pm
Does your author note mean we won't get another update until after Saturday? Say it ain't so. You've spoiled us beyond redemption with your current pace. We NEED to see Umbridge get her comeuppance at the DA meeting (fingers crossed here). Get hold of a time-turner and get back to typing (pretty please). Our impatience (my daughter is an anxious fan also) is a measure of how much we love your story.
bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 8:15am
Great stuff.
Why do I suspect that the note on Umbridge's door was written by someone in the Pride? Don't answer that, it was rhetorical.
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 8:10am
Grrr! Argh!!! Grrr!!! Argh!! Was that convincing enough as a one man angry mob? Please update like this forever its great. So annoying that real life gets in the way.
Gotta love the Siss didn't have a high tolerance for idiots!
Despite my thoughts that the Slytherins had to come up with the mean version of Weasley is our King before the Gryffie's changed it back in canon. I still loved it though, especially at the end when they sung it for all the Weasleys. Genius that was!
Putting yourself in a story, is also cool!
Can't wait for more!
Thanks for writing.
Monkey
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Well, in canon, Draco Malfoy wrote the mean version. So I thought it was fitting to have Draco Black write the good version in DV.
Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 3:39am
OK that wasn't nice leaving us like that. Was the note a prank? Is someone betraying Harry? Is Dumbledore going to show up with lemon drops laced with LSD for everyone? Stay tuned for the next chapter of Facing Danger
Btw placing yourself in the portrait fits into the story pretty well after all you do have complete control of thier fate so you should give them advice to be happy before you start doing more nasty things to them.
Rob
LoneWolfe posted a comment on Wednesday 25th July 2007 4:53pm