Saphimire posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 11:25am

I love Dangerverse. Charries are real and situations are more or less real ( :-) ) and reactions are consistent with personality. Keep it up! ^_^

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 8:02am

Meaghan can really be a little madame at times! Great chapter, slightly disappointed that the chapter was quite short considering you left us on a cliffie and left us over a month! Now onto praise for your lovely writing, and getting down on my knees actually begging for more as soon as you are capable!
Thanks for writing!
Monkey

Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Sunday 1st July 2007 2:11pm

Wow! I'm so happy to see an update. Holy crap, that was really good. Details, I like details and this chapter was full of them. The rescue sounded and felt, to me anyway, like a real mission. The reactions everyone had, brilliant. I loved this. Also, that bit about a new opening, I think, of Salazar's. Awesome. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter, okay, yes I can, but I'm looking forward to it anyway. Cheers.

~Ivy

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 1st July 2007 9:10am

{exfiltration theme from "M:I" tvshow}It should be a lesson that Harry takes to heart, the team wins where a lone individual would not.{/music} Seriously, a good chapter that ties the action up well; somehow I suspect the Death Eaters won't be seeing that one again as he's likely to be drained of what (little) knowledge he has of their activities and then "sequestered" until the conflict is finished. I'd hazard a guess that he'll be better off than in Azkaban but not free by any stretch of the imagination.

I'll be interested in finding out who the other guardians are, this is getting delightfully interesting.

A good chapter that was well worth the wait.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Sunday 1st July 2007 7:35am

Exciting jailbreak!

gypsy posted a comment on Saturday 30th June 2007 7:32pm

Well, for the last month or so I've been completely engrossed in your fics, your creations from the beginning. I love the Pack and the Pride and can't wait for the next installment. Your writing is very well done with the right balance of drama, angst, fluff and spirit. Fanstastic world.
Gypsy

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Saturday 30th June 2007 3:07am

Oh my gosh. On the edge of my seat!!! This was SO good!!! Wow. very exciting, but they got Graham!!! Yippee!!!

Love the death muncher's POV - that was quite funny.

Poor Meghan, it has to be hard for her. She's younger than the rest - not like Ginny and Luna but tremendously much younger, and to keep up she acts a lot older. When her age supersedes her maturity (rare though it does happen), she feels it so keenly.

I love Sangre appearing. You have written a very believable and enjoyable character in her! I look forward to seeing where Salazar's entrance is. :-)

I just want to say how much I enjoy all of the stories you create with these characters. I have read them all except the latest Star Wars one, which I will take the time to read once it is complete. These characters are SO enjoyable, and your integration of the canon events with the uniqueness of your story is skilfully and masterfully done. Kudos!

Cheers,

Cassie

callie posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 11:29pm

that was sooooooooooooo good

can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

don't know what else to say except that i have always loved this story!!!

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 4:15pm

Woohoo!! An update! An outside exit/entrance to the den could be useful for the pride... Thank You, Salazar... Can't wait for the next chapter! I will be waiting patiently (or not so patiently as the case may be :P hehe)

Graup posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 4:11pm

Enjoyed the last 2 chapters - especially the rescue of little Graham.

Good job - do you plan to continue to the end?

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 10:22am

Thank you, thank you. This was a great chapter to close up this part of the fifth year. I like how they work so well as a team. And I hope we don't have to wait until sixth year for your Harry to get a clue about Ginny.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 8:28am

Great chapter update soon.

MPF

Saffron posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 6:46am

Thank you so much for updating, but I can tell you that this chapter was well worth the wait! During other stories I've read that had action-packed sequences like Graham's rescue, I had no idea what was going on. I had a perfect picture in my mind of how things were unfolding as I read this. Great job on this chapter and I can't wait to read the next one!

xohorsegal752ox posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 5:57am

Keep up the great work. Still loving it and anxiously awaiting the next update.

~L-Dawg~

Rachael Price posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 4:55am

What an exciting chapter! Well done.

Jiapa posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 4:16am

Thank you for the new chapter and the thrilling rescue. I'm looking forward to seeing what Harry and Sangre find.

Jon Cottrell posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 4:08am

two things

Firstly, you are evil for making us wait this long
Secondly, RL can be hecktic and confusing and just plain weird so take as long as you need

as always, a superb chapter, i like :D

matrixcrawler posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 3:32am

Greetings

My apologies for never leaving a review previously. Your version of the events in the HP universe has in my humble opinion been very well done. I have to admit having some reservations about some of the fluffiness and the performance event that you created in the triwizard tourney, but over all a well crafted story. Thank you for sharing.

stargirl404 posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 2:37am

I loved the chapter and am REALLY happy to see that Graham's safe. Please update sooner!*Hint* I'm really looking forward to the next couple of chapters and well... the rest of it actually!

uthamm posted a comment on Friday 29th June 2007 2:01am

Nice chapter & it came just when I needed a 'fix'. I like the growing roles that you portray. There is danger and things don't always go right. You showed a great characterization of dealing with stress and working up the learning curve (e.g. Harry realizing that he has a role, albeit reluctantly; Meghan's stress over her error, etc.). Looking forward to more!