Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 3:15pm

Ok, Harry is upset about Cho and her reactions. I figured that one wasn't going to work but I never expected her to react the way she did. That was unexpected. Now the pride is going to rescue Graham. We knew that couldn't go too smoothly. I really hope noone gets hurt in this. I really look forward to your next update. I am so glad you have been updating as often as you have. Thank you very much and thank you for writigng. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 2:20pm

Well, they are planning the recue of Graham very well. Of course there are problems but that is why you plan. So you can anticipate the problems and work out solutions beforehand.
The biggest problem is with Cho. She has a lot of misconceptions. Blood magic is always dark.
Assuming Harry has slept with others. In a way he has on den nights but that is inocent sleeping with his family. His loved ones. Cho will never understand. Hermione's warning is a little more understandaable now. Her warning for Harry to be careful was very important. Harry forgot Hermione is a seer in her own right. Her words need to be heeded. Thanks for writing. This is really good. I look forward to your updates. pms

David posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 2:18pm

Poor Pearl... every time she loses her temper.

Regarding Draco... maybe I'm just polishing my bona-fides for "Moody, Jr." paranoia, but I smell an infiltration/spy attempt. Love potions, mayhap?

Either that, or someone playing a deeper game and setting up girls like Cho and Amanda.. and maybe boys like Michael Corner, to run into misunderstandings that then would turn into "honest" anti-Pack/Pride gossip.

Saffron posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 1:49pm

How could you leave us with another cliff-hanger?? Fine. Be that way. Keep em coming.

Hugs,
Saffron

redjacobson posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 1:18pm

Loved what you did to Umbridge; but I was expecting more of a "Croak" or "Riiibitt!" from her.

Please update soon, I really don't like cliffhangers!

red

karina82 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:51pm

oh man what's gona happen now? hope they pride is able to make it back to hogwarts.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:42pm

Cliffie!!!! I KNOW that they'll get out of there okay ... or pretty much okay ... at least I hope so ... and I REALLY hope to find out soon! I love this series!

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 11:39am

This is well done. I'm glad Percy is coming to see Molly and the family. Thank goodness he is starting to get the picture. I can understand why Ron is frustrated. Ginny will be too but Hermione's solution so they can all help is brilliant. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more. pms

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:46am

Heh, both Harry and Draco are having girl problems of different sorts, not that I think either would trade with the other. I suspect this is going to get Harry to re-evaluate his relationship choices and I wish Draco the fortitude to remain strong to his commitment to Luna.

The rescue attempt went better than expected, but "no battle plan survives contact with the enemy", so I imagine things are about to go quite wrong there.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 7:57am

Poor Harry, Cho isn't very understanding though perhaps I can see why. Love Meghan's spell. Laughed aloud at Dolores's predicament. That was such a great chapter but such a mean place to leave it! More please. Great stuff.

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 5:28am

You are a wicked, wicked, cruel author! Not really, you write such great stories that we can forgive you the odd cliffie.
I thought you would drag out the Harry/Cho stuff for longer, I think its good you didn't though. The subtlety with which you re-introduced Harry's summer thoughts of Ginny really worked and hopefully that will develop as well as everything else you write does!
Thanks for writing, can't wait for more!
Monkey

amulder posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:48am

Yes it's good. Yes I wish it wouldn't take so long to update. Yes you are a bad author for giving us a cliff-hanger. No I do not understand this little episode of Draco's. He's never given the time of day to a thought about other girls before.

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frances posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:21am

Evil isn't the word! There has to be something stronger than that...
No matter, it was a great chapter and worth waiting for. I must say, all the raging teenage hormones are really getting out of hand. I enjoyed reading it and will wait with bated breath for the next update.

john2 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:18pm

All ways a pleasure to slip into your family-friendly world for a new chapter.

When will Harry get a clue?

David13 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 8:12pm

Another interesing chapter I can't wait to see what is next. That being said Harry is still the only one that seems to be making stupid mistakes while everyone else seems to manage just fine to get without making them or at least getting caught. It just doesn't make sense everyone is always getting on Harry's case about things he does wrong but they never have problems? They are teenagers and should all make mistakes from time to time, and just showing Harry's mistakes it makes him seem really stupid compared to all his other family members and friends.

It would be nice and realistic for Harry to talk to someone for being stupid just once then he wouldn't seem like the idiot screwup compared to the rest of the pride.

After all in canon, Ron is a load mouth who says stupid things and same with Draco, also Hermione always thinks she is right even when she is wrong. This makes it seem like they are human and in my opinion your stories just make it seem like Harry is an idiot.

That is not to say I don't like the stories or that I will stop reading just that this one aspect makes the other characters unrealistic.

FriskyPixie posted a comment on Thursday 10th May 2007 11:27am

OMG! I love these stories! I've read these when I was supposed to be working, lol. I can't wait till the next chapter! Please upsate soon!

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Wednesday 25th April 2007 3:53pm

This is wonderful, I can't wait for Grahams rescue....Please hurry. If there is anyway I can be of service so you can finish; Babysit, Walk the dog, do your homework... Please let me know. I can't wait!

Saphimire posted a comment on Wednesday 25th April 2007 12:37pm

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE your Dangerverse.... I LOVE your fanfics... I LOVE EVERYTHING IN THIS AU!!!!!!

*pants*

Anyways, I just wanted to tell you to keep up the good work and not get discouraged. I can't WAIT till your next update! ^^

Saffron posted a comment on Tuesday 24th April 2007 12:05pm

Haha, poor Harry. Cho's kind of a handful. Update soon!

Saffron

Broducce posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2007 2:12am

Oh, wow. This review, by the way, isn't just for this chapter. It's for the entire series, and one-shots, and everything! I really like your writing. I'm not much of a reviewer, but this is really good.

Except for the very, very beginning. Danger bugged me a little when we first met her. But other than that, wooh! I like a story with a good plot and no grammar mistakes!

-Just Another Fan aka Broducce