Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 12:51pm

No! Not Sirius! *cries* hasn't he been through enough?

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 12:33pm

I'm glad it wasn't too easy for someone to find Harry. A lot of fics have him disappear but get home too easily. It's more interesting this way. Well done!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 2:31am

Poor Hermione... She just had to fall for the guy who makes being oblivious an art form. I hope they get together eventually. Nicely done on Hermiones tantrum. It was a very realistic scene. Well done!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 2:01am

Aah... It's always satisfying to see Dumbitch taken down a few pegs! Great job!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 1:27am

I really like the fire sculpting. Your descriptions really evoked an image in my head. Fantastic work!

Anansii posted a comment on Wednesday 9th March 2011 1:17am

Blue. Gem?

And she's halfway there already, I'd say...

HGRHfan35 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th March 2011 3:09am

So good to see you back on track.
I hope you are doing okay in your RL?

allii posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2011 4:31pm

So glad everything's coming right, and Aletha's figured out how she fits, even if she doesn't remember.
Sending positive thoughts your way!

Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2011 7:14am

Good chapter. Peter and Evanie getting married could possibly be the thing to help Peter change. Can't wait to read what happens there.

I'm glad that the 'bad things' are coming to an end. It's about time something good happened to them all (Pack and Pride).

[u]GOOD THOUGHTS and PRAYERS [/u]sent to you to help you.

Dangams posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2011 6:26am

Yay! The plot marcheth forth!
Aletha is intelligent! Danger is cunning! Sirius is Sirius!
I eagerly await the next chapter. :)

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2011 3:43am

Yay! The beginnings of things coming right. Although I have this... feeling... that the revenge isn't going to work out quite as Danger & Sirius planned. How long after the wedding before Peter & Evanie end up in the Marauder's Den, or at least completely outside the orbit of the DEez? We'll see.

Sigh, I do miss Trylasotar. Reviews there got email replies.

AnnaTigg posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 5:44pm

Lots of good thoughts and prayers coming your way right now. Another fantastic chapter. Loved the conversation between Danger and Evanie. Hurrah, "Mare" has discovered her true identity (even if she's not quite convinced yet) and is off to fetch some very useful things and hopefully administer some appropriate punishment to Malfoy along the way. Intrigued by Danger's complex justice for Peter and how she conveyed that to Sirius. And Remus is coming back to us, if gradually. All in all, pretty good! Extremely glad that Bad Things are coming to an end by the way...
See you next week I hope (and I hope this coming week will be less stressful for you).
Anna

rawrlaur posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 3:10pm

Hello!
I just completely caught up on your mainverse.I'm giddy with excitement too, because you updated today and I was like a rabid animal when I was reading it and now I'm like the little match girl because I've finished every chapter.
I came across your story by listening to potterficweekly, I didn't read it when they were (what was that . . . THREE YEARS AGO?!)but I'm going back and reading the stories I didn't read and i was excited and tentative to begin yours. Look where I am, I'm completely packified.
I want to change several aspects of your plot, by several i mean one, by this i mean i want to stop it happening and created a possibility that it could happen (which it probably wont). I want to stop Darco dying, so my theory is that Draco and LM polyjuice or somehow switch bodies so that it really isn't Draco who dies. Also i totally knew it about the blue jewel. So with the jewel's, Alex said something about them not having only a few uses (i'm assuming it was Alex), could the jewel's then work however the user wants them to as long as they know their motives and which jewel it would be? Within reason of course, like if someone had to use parseltongue, if they figured out which jewel, could they use it with the right knowledge, though it might not work how they thought?
I'm so excited but now i have to wait a week. A huge long week.It's time to read the rest of your fics. Also i would love to see the ultra long Joseph musicalfic!
<3333
Laur

dadscooking posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 3:09pm

wow - several hard chapters but you keep me on the edge of my seat.

kendiara posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 1:45pm

Yay Letha! There's a part of me that has to laugh that she didn't expect Sirius to figure out what she was talking about. And oh I love the foreshadowing last chapter about leaving Lucius's face perfect except for the 1 inch up and down scar :)

Kirk posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 1:26pm

I think I know, but...

I just caught up with your series last night, and then viola! another update today. So, thank you for that little gift.

I can't wait to discover what happens.

carolebear posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 12:55pm

So sorry things are stressful for you right now. I just finished lots of stress myself, but now have a little time off. I pray that you find the time to rest and recharge yourself, body and mind. *puppy dog eyes* And maybe that writing is stress free for you?

*squeals with excitement* I did it; I finally figured out something on my own! Ohmygod I’m so excited! (My husband thinks I’m totally out of my mind, dancing around the house.) Of course the part that was actually right was just thrown out there with several other guesses, and I didn’t realize that the part of the song we needed was the last word, but still. *wiggles in her chair like an excited puppy* It wasn’t danger at all, but the colors, the color that Aletha left out. Blue JEWEL! And Letha knows that, even if she can’t remember why. I don’t think she has used any of her jewels yet. I thought Letha’s nest was right off the kitchen — if she could hear Sirius, why couldn’t she hear Danger and Evanie talking?

And I was right about Remus responding to Danger’s need, too, wasn’t I? This is the second time it happened. Was what you were waiting to put into the DV the fact that Evanie and Peter would eventually be married? This is the only thing that I hate about reading a story like this — waiting for updates. It so definitely worth the wait, though, so don’t think I’m really complaining. *smooches* to you!

LynnTerald posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 12:31pm

I liked the part about Evanie and Peter maybe getting married. That means there still might be hope for him. I am glad to see you integrating some of the side fics into the main storyline. I especially like the way Danger set it up so that Peter would either have to stop caring about her to stop being fearful or he would have to figure out some way to escape. I don't see him joining the pack anytime soon or ever but I wouldn't mind if he and Evanie simply vanished to live a quiet, happy life together after the war ended.

As far as Aletha and Sirius go...that scene left me screaming when she was still denying being Sirius' wife. I understand that it is the natural conclusion to come to about one's life if they do not remember, but I still liked the ending scene sooooo much better. She doesn't quite remember, but she's getting there. YAY!! ^_^

I think I can see where this is leading to for Remus and Danger. If its not in the chapter after next then it is relatively soon that the "dream" will come true and then I have no idea what happens for them.

Draco's death I think I have mulled over enough to think I understand what is going to happen. I still hope that he will live a long time past his "expiration" date and that L.M will still get offed before that happens, but I'm okay with how I think it will end up. If it doesn't...*evil eye, pull out pitchfork and torch,creepy smile* Seriouly, though, we'll cross that bridge when we get there and find out how the story twists if it does happed.

Now, onto FINALS!!! and looking forward to another chapter after everything is done ;D

ilovewhydouneedtoknow posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 12:00pm

Go defeat those nasty work bugs!!! i hope that the stress will soon go away but i must say its amazing that you are updating so much and dealing with stress at work good for you!!! have a good week :D i feel silly because i still havent figured it out yet but im slowly getting it i havent had time to figure it out at least thats what i keep telling myself :)

AwesomelyMoi posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 9:38am

Okay, I'll admit it. I'm not a very intelligent reader, and I have absolutely NO IDEA what's going to happen. Actually, I'm also a leetle bit confused about what's going on now. But hey,that's the fun of things right? So I'll be properly surprised at the end of the Bad Things.

Other than that, great job! Your writing is excellent as always, and you've inspired me to start writing my own fanfic. I can't wait for your update next week!!!