By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
worldwarrior posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2011 4:35pm
awesome!!! i love nima reminds me a bit of myself funnily enough :D i love preztals though dont drink wine :)its an awesome new world you came up with and love the new people thanks for updating your doing a great job and have been for awhile :D
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Nima doesn't drink much either, but she's been off it for that same five months so she's really wanting some.
Erika Shulkusky posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2011 12:15pm
Wow, this new story is really cool. I wasn't sure where you were going with it from the first 2 chapters, but the 3rd and 4th started pulling it together for me. You are extremely creative and I think this story will really go places. I am also anxiously awaiting Surpassing Danger. I don't do Facebook but I am still one of your biggest fans and will keep on reading! I hope you read these comments for those of us who do not Facebook- I am probably going to break down and join it one day... Erika
Anne B. Walsh replied:
I'm so glad you like it! Yes, the first and second chapters were necessarily a bit mysterious, but that's about as far as I think I can get anyone to go without explanation. SD is building in the back of the mind so don't give up! I do also have a blog, if you're looking for more news of me... it's called "Writing Outside the Cube" and I'm going to write a new entry as soon as I post Chapter 5 here...
Waywren Truesong posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2011 9:49pm
....Bugger the RCs and the Ridges both, I'll love whom I love. *hugs Fox and Neenie* And I would LOVE that muffin recipe!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
It's people like you who alternately thrill and terrify me. Muffin recipe will be sent.
worldwarrior posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2011 7:14pm
yes! i knew it i knew they were still alive! i love this universe!!! its alot like the one im working on right now. :D though i started mine about 6 months ago but havent had time to put it on fanfic maybe one day when its good enough.
thanks for updating!!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Let it ripen. If it's a good story, it'll get better with time, not worse.
Bialystoker posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2011 1:17pm
Ooh, I like where this is going! I completely agree with you that *really good* fanfiction gets a bad rap and is grouped unfairly with the loads of trash that are out there. And who is this pretzel girl?
Anne B. Walsh replied:
And in this universe, by definition, if it's not good, it's not powerful. The pretzel girl is a new character, a Legendbreaker from another 'verse (actually an original story of mine) and one of Neenie and Fox's neighbors. More about her next time!
Deborahsu posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 8:12pm
Your story is growing ... I now understand better how it all came to be as it is, and have a glimpse of where it's going. I look forward to seeing it all fleshed out!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
More on the way!
csktech posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 6:15pm
Wow.. This is striking me as a logical outbreak from Heinlein's Multiverse. As the song sezs Loving every miniute of it.
Kyle
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Don't think I've run across it in Heinlein, though I have read quite a bit of him. I was thinking more along the lines of Diana Wynne Jones, though with my own spin, of course.
callie posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 6:06pm
Awsome amazing wonderful!!!! love it love it love it!!!!!
my favourite was hermione's explanation of everything!!!! very very good!!!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Glad it helped!
Sim posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 5:04pm
I moved to London gently and have found that they call them corgettes not zucchinis here.
...but that is my only picky.
Definitely investing, want to know more.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Thanks for the pick! Fixed in chapter!
BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 4:28pm
So good.
Once more you got me hooked.
I hope to hear from you really soon again,
Greetings, Baltaine
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Me and my writing drugs...
Prongsie posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 3:41pm
OMG. If you do something, you go all the way, don't you? I love it. During my reading of the first chapter, I was basically very confused, but when reading the following chapters... Well, wow. And I suppose you sometimes think of DV as something that got out off control, right? ;) So HP is het ridge, as they say, and DV would be the tell of HP. Did I get that right?
Anyway, I'm VERY interested in all your new ideas, so keep writing them down! Oh, and make sure that when you are published, the nice people in Europe (and in my case, especially Belgium) are able to buy your books ;)
Good luck!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Oh, DV absolutely got out of control and took over my life, but I'm loving it all the same! You got the terms exactly right -- nicely done! I shall make sure to put the books on sites where Euro-types can buy them, so no worries!
Dangams posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 3:35pm
Ooh, nice chapter. I liked the explanation of the Legendbreakers universe. Very well done.
And I like mysterious pretzel girl. Especially her entrance. That's the sort of randomness I appreciate. :D
More soon, please!
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Mysterious pretzel girl gets a name next chapter, and some reasoning behind her lust!
Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 2:28am
This is great. Neenie has Fox back and they are both sealed to the Outer Time. I'm so glad she has him with her now. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
Anne B. Walsh replied:
More is on its way, as soon as tonight or tomorrow!
cliviussum posted a comment on Tuesday 30th August 2011 5:23am
Another rather confusing but nevertheless informative chapter; I had more or less gathered the facts behind the situation in Chapter 2, but given that chapter 3 was available decided not to offer the next review until I read that (insecurity?:-))
Thank you again; I await the explanations promised in chapter 4 to alleviate my grey-haired perceptions of inadequacy:-).
Tibi etc, Clivius
Anne B. Walsh replied:
I hope to cut down on the confusion starting next chapter.
cliviussum posted a comment on Tuesday 30th August 2011 4:57am
Although I have no idea of 'The legend-breaker Universe' or what it means, I thoroughly enjoyed this little sojourn into such. With the information you provided, I was able to get a glimmer of the situation plus the idea that the legend-breakers stop fate/destiny/kismet whatever and the Reality corps try their best to get in their way or put things back to as they were had the RBs not intervened.
Apart from that thank you for another story an I will look forward to this one's completion.
Tibi grates ago fabellae novae, ave atque vale Clivius.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
That's what I'm writing this story to explain, since I'm so far the only one who really does know what that universe is all about. You're welcome, and hope you keep enjoying!
callie posted a comment on Tuesday 30th August 2011 1:41am
very good chapter and the last one was too if i didn't review...
this was just what i needed my sister will be closer to you than me by the end of the week and i had to say goodbye today... she's going on exchange to canada which is amazing but it also means i wont see her for 5 months... so thankyou very much for this update
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Aww, sorry to hear. More updates soon to keep your mood up!
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Monday 29th August 2011 8:58pm
Explanations. Explanations are good.
THE LION THE SNAKE AND THE SAFE ROOM.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Yikes! *claps hands over ears* No need to yell!
worldwarrior posted a comment on Monday 29th August 2011 8:31pm
whoop go neenie go fox!!!!!!!!!! thanks for updating so soon.
i wonder if the pride got caught too.... i hope they find everyone they better bc if anyone is dead ill be very put out. jk you write it the way you want to or the book sometimes the book takes over i know how that is.
Anne B. Walsh replied:
Yes, it does love to take its own twists and turns. Now to decide which ones I'll allow and which I have to be firm with...
Dangams posted a comment on Monday 29th August 2011 7:44pm
A good chapter. :) Yay for finding Fox. Time for the Legendbreakers to start kicking arse soon?
Write more soon! :)
Anne B. Walsh replied:
To both your question and your desire: Yes, very soon!
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2011 4:59pm
Anne B. Walsh replied: