By Anne B. Walsh
Reviews
kendiara posted a comment on Saturday 30th August 2014 9:32pm
Squee! YAYAY!!!! I'm so happy and sad and happy :)
carolebear posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 3:00pm
"A child," [Corona] breathed soundlessly. "Elladora had a child…" Well, not exactly, I don't think. How about "Elladora IS a child." Shrinking solution? So if you don't take the antidote, you are left permanently in that stage (or at least until you "grow up" again)? As Severus said, perfect justice, with mercy she did not deserve. And now the second pack has their second child, as I suppose she could be considered "left." Well done, indeed.
Emi226 posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 12:06pm
Love this! And I know that there are lots of little threads I'm missing so can't wait to go back and read it all the way through again once its complete. Glad Severus is getting his recognition and that things are starting to fall into place. Can't believe theres only 9 chapters left. Thank you for such a wonderful story.
bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 11:49am
Nice. CLeaning up the mess from the previous chapter, and setting up the chapters to come, with enough emotion to keep it interesting.
About time Severus started getting the respect he really deserves.
Nenya posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 3:20am
I don't know what to say/do except bounce! :-) also, huzzah for the second Pack and their given and inherited cubs! Those two girls are going to be trouble...do I see a spinoff in the works?
karm23 posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 8:52pm
Anne,
You have no idea how great it's been to get home for these past few Friday's after a long week to a new chapter. I can't believe we're nine chapters away.... What a ride it has been. I'm glad Meghan was able to heal herself, but it will certainly be a little difficult for her to adapt to this once again. Thanks for all the effort and work you put into every one of your chapters! Until next time!!
buffarama posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 8:23pm
start of second pride :) that's not elladora's baby, that's elladora. siri giving up megan not giving foreshadowing anymore....lena gets over her bad bits, yay. let's break moldyvoldy
kendiara posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 5:52pm
Yep "Give her to me...please" was what he said before, and if I remember right Sirius thought that was going to happen again sometime. I love Sirius. Also Snape. And you :)
PreseliAvalon posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 5:49pm
GAAAHHHH! OMG. I love this story so much. Yay! Swearing!McGonagall. Sneaky!Snarky!Snape...Though, that is how he usually is...so no change for him really...Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
Scott M posted a comment on Monday 18th August 2014 1:46pm
So Meghan is the first to give them up, as required. And she managed to use them on both people who needed it beforehand, or in the process. Three, if you count the bargain's fulfillment. :-) Now they just have to escape a heavily fortified cell...
AnnaTigg posted a comment on Sunday 17th August 2014 6:41am
Oh my word. On my second reading of this chapter already and loving every word as usual. Have been re-reading SD in preparation for the build up to the Last Battle (tm). Can't wait for your next update
collide-a-scope posted a comment on Saturday 16th August 2014 10:00am
Yayayayay, I spotted a quote that was on the Facebook list and it was said by the person who I thought it would! Hooray for Snape! Great chapter Anne, definitely gaining momentum now!
Nenya posted a comment on Saturday 16th August 2014 9:23am
Oh my...the raven shall take his place with honour indeed. That, Anne, was just beautiful. Congratulations.
Dangams posted a comment on Friday 15th August 2014 7:45pm
Wow, go Severus! That speech really works! And bold, brave Meghan. Can't wait for the next chapter!
PreseliAvalon posted a comment on Friday 15th August 2014 7:43pm
Wow. Even with the spoilery bits you give us, I'm taken by surprise.
buffarama posted a comment on Friday 15th August 2014 7:38pm
you actually made me tear up, PAGE. i have a feeling the gryff heirship is going to ne up in the air as long as you can manage it
carolebear posted a comment on Friday 15th August 2014 7:21pm
Yes yes yes yes yes YES!!! This was so perfect. You are so amazing, to weave all these different elements together.
On another note, your stories have the least number or grammatical and spelling errors that I have ever seen. I can't remember the last time I even saw one. (And based on the speed that you say you finished a chapter and then post, you are just that good!) All in all, you are just the perfect author.
kendiara posted a comment on Friday 15th August 2014 6:08pm
"And the raven will one day take his place of honor...." god that makes me cry.
bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2014 4:30pm
Wow! What an incredible chapter! Let the rest of the story be of this quality! So I speak, so I request...
buffarama posted a comment on Saturday 30th August 2014 9:35pm