Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 2:15am

Ouch. I guess it's the toad that's talking to dementors here as well... Horrid witch. Great story, and just creepy enough to keep me on the edge of my seat.

You have a great writing style, you know that, right? Good!

Off to the next chappie...

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 4:11am

I like 'Sirius Valentine Black', plenty of amusement potential there, but given that Sirius's father's name is Orion, it's more likely to be 'Sirius Orion Black'. Especially with all the amusement potential (not to mention literal truth) inherent in the initials S.O.B.

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Agreed about the amusement potential in the initials, and the canon plausibility,  but please do remember this part of the story was written before  I even knew there was going to be a Black family tree, and I'd just seen 'Orion' for Sirius' middle name  a bit too much  and wanted something original.  

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 3:43am

Something suddenly occurred to me. The story makes sense with Fudge as Minister, and it would probably get worse if you tried to change it, but Fudge wasn't Minister this far back. He was a junior member of the Dept of Magical Catastrophes on Nov 1 1981, among the first there after the street went boom, and didn't become Minister till 1990, according to the Quibbler (which is unlikely to get wrong the year of election of the Prime Minister-equivalent). Millicent Bagnold was Minister in 1981, I'm positive of that.

This really isn't worth changing, I just thought you should know.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 30th March 2006 11:09pm

Yay - cool start! For some odd reason I've been putting off reading your fics, a chilidish reaction to your pen name I guess... But this is far from being childish! Highly intriguing, and I really look forward to reading the lot. Hermione having a big sister who's a seer is a neat twist, indeed.

Thanks for sharing - I'm off to the next chappie!

Berte

Chris1 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 3:23am

Oh no you don't! Don't tell me Snape wins!! I hate the idea x.x :(

Great story, by the way. Very captivating :)

Chris1 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 3:13am

Weird chapter. I hate Snape :D I hope he sticks to canon, because I can't see him good. Not in this story. :)

Chris1 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 2:32am

ROFL at the last line :D

Great chapter. A bit of a filler feeling to it, but very good.

Chris1 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 2:19am

Great chapter :) I was wondering when she'd be included.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 5:28am

ROFL wonderful chapter :D Very funny ^_^

Well, that's it for today, I'll read the rest of the story tomorrow, my eyes are killing me now.

Thank you for such a good read :)

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 5:17am

ROFLROFL Feetie fudge :D

Great chapter :) There is a good balance of happy and sad in this story. Well written.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 5:02am

Highly emotional scene, the letter to Andromeda.

Good job. :)

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 4:41am

You're very good at writing Draco, and the adults, trying to help him. Great chapter.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 4:14am

Whoah. Creepy ending.

Very emotional chapter. And this is the first time that I find myself admiring Narcissa. very, very well written.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 4:05am

Interesting chapter. I like the idea of Lucius being beaten by two kids :D

Now, off to read the next one, before I die of curiosity

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:54am

Aaaahhhhh!!!

No Lucius!!! I can't take the stress :D

*runs off to read the next chapter*

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:43am

Very emotional ending. Very, very well-written.

Keep them up ^_^ :D

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:18am

Dumbest look :D ROFL

You have a great sense of humour, did you know that? :D

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:04am

Whoah. A whole chapter all about a letter. Long chapter, at that. No too many who could manage that ^_^

Great job. :)

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 2:56am

Wonderful. :) for some reason, the last line brought tears to my eyes.

Beautiful imagery and emotions.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 2:45am

Another wonderful chapter. :)

Off to read more