Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 8:02pm

I knew she was going to kill herself - there was no way Lucius would let her live after that so it's better it's on her own terms. I love the way you manouvered Draco into the Pack.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:56pm

This is so good. I love the way they make friends with Draco, free Dobby & realise Harry's a parseltongue in one neat section.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:50pm

Oh, that's clever. I love the floo alarm too.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:44pm

I think I know who the 4th child will be. Excellent chapter.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:36pm

Uhoh. I'm not sure I want Dudley to go to Hogwarts but it'll be very funny if he does. Great chapter. I love how the curse works.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:24pm

The joke in Latin was my favourite bit. I loved it though all of this chapter was really good.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 7:01pm

Minerva's actions against Dumbledore are my favourite part of this chapter. Boy was he quick working that out. Great stuff.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 6:56pm

This was such a sweet chapter. I really enjoyed the way you just broke him out.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 10:20am

Poor, poor Harry. The curse was a good idea though. Good chapter.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 10:08am

I'm British and I wanted to correct the odd reviewer (I read down beneath mine and was a bit shocked by their nastiness). Social Services can be good but I also know that they can fail horribly (I could list details but it would be a bit nasty for a simple review) and unless there is obvious signs of abuse and immediate the child is usually left with the family. Only if abuse is obvious and frequent are children automatically removed. (Sad but true.) I thought Harry's reaction was right. Small children tend to have strong, uncontrolled reactions and don't just whisper fears unless they were severely reprimanded for it before. As for nicknames: I know a tough boy nicknamed Bambi. Danger is nothing on what Brits can call each other. Finally: love the idea of werewolf tamer.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 10:01am

This was recommended to me by a friend who insisted I read it. Now I understand why. Absolutely fantastic chapter. I was a little worried by the OC nature of this but Danger is interesting and definitely not Mary-Sueish so my worries are over. Great stuff.

Bellatrix_vecours posted a comment on Friday 28th July 2006 3:09pm

Gorgeous fic. Really. You had me on the edge of my seat.

Bellatrix_vecours posted a comment on Friday 28th July 2006 12:07pm

Your translation of 'severus' is a bit loose. My dictionary says it means 'grave, austerstrict;hardsh, hard.'

Sarah B posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 12:36am

Fantastic story. I really enjoyed your characterisations and the original characters are great. It's a fascinating idea and the plot twists and humour work very well. I look forward to reading the other stories in this series.
Sarah.

James Porter posted a comment on Wednesday 19th July 2006 2:31pm

hi im james porter yes real name i just thought i would tell you this story is awsome.
i look foward to reading the rest.
sylitherin resident
james porter

n4zhg posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 11:25am

Translation for Molesti sunt dei please?

Anne B. Walsh replied:

Roughly, "The Marauders are gods."  

gaul2000 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2006 4:34pm

good chapter, i should finish more soon

Maddie Potter posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2006 5:26pm

Hey,
I got this link off your Yahoo group, I wanted to read your story with the song lyrice this time round!

Luv Maddie xox

pstibbons posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 6:04pm

Thanks for tjhis whole story. It is well written, funny. While overly lyrical at times, I understand most people like that sort of things. I just like witty dialogs.

Interesting hypothesis you have on Luna's 'injections'.

I think the overly riddlic prophecies were a bit much, but this is me trying to find something wrong with the story. So much is done right that I can't write all that down.

pstibbons posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 1:23pm

the last message of Dora was priceless.