Rocky235 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:47pm

Gosh, I hate malfoy.

You've had many , many new ideas. The broom rental place was pretty neat. Here we are at chapter 18 and thing have been pleasent and relaxing for a long while.

I hate Malfoy.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 8:10am

Now I have to 'run' with the sweeper.
Every word of yours made it worth it.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 6:47am

The Dursleys deserve all you can give them.

I love this. A wonderful story and no waiting.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 6:32am

Well, if I skip cleaning the guest bedroom, hmmm.

I'm enjoying your work a great deal.

Tildessmoo posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 4:25am

I'd planned on reviewing at the end of what has, thus far, been written, but as a great fan of the song in question, I felt compelled to compliment you on your talespinning abilities, culture integration, and originality, and just plain taste in music. Till I finish LwD:
Un flambeau, Jeanette, Isabelle,
Un flambeau, courons au berceau.
C'est Jésus, bons gens du hameau;
"Le Christ est né," Marie apelle;
Ah! Ah! Ah! Que la mère est belle!
Ah! Ah! Ah! Que l'enfant est beau!

Mariposa posted a comment on Thursday 16th March 2006 3:08pm

I like this beginning and all the forshadowing :o) You're poem is great! I normally wouldn't review until I've read the whole fic but I just had to now, I really liked this begining :oD

Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Thursday 16th March 2006 10:33am

I found this story because I was looking through stories that I haven't read in fanficauthors before, and looked at yours. Really good so far, and can't wait to read more of it.

karina82 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 5:51pm

i've said once and i'll say it again the chapters are so much better with the lyrics in them.

crawfsh posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2006 6:05pm

Interesting beginning. I must continue reading...

karina82 posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 3:21pm

man i really like reading the lyrics to those songs. this one brought back memories from when i was a kid.

karina82 posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 2:43pm

man i still feel bad for narcissa. but it's still cool that she wanted her son to have a better life.

karina82 posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 12:58pm

wow, i like the lyrics in these chapters. they help me get a better picture in my head (crazy i know). i'm having fun rereading all these chapters.

until next review
karina82
a.k.a. karina122082 (on yahoo group)
and darkcelestial20 (ff.net and i think fiction ally)

Rose posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 3:11pm

Hey! I'm a lurker that's never really reviewed before, that I know of that is. I love your stories, and in waiting for your next chapter to come out in DwD, I decided to reread this one, which I'm glad I did because now I can read them with the lyrics. ;) Anyway, I mainly reviewed this chapter because I thought it funny that from the British people's point of view the American anthem seems a little ridiculous because the British anthem is too. I mean, why the bloody hell does the queen need to be saved for? She's got all those guards around her as it is! Not that I'm poking fun at the British because I happen to like them, I just thought it was funny.

Mickey posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 2:21pm

Very nice. I really liked you prophecies.

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 10:35am

I can't believe I'd never found this story before! I loved it; and now I'm going to start on the next one. I have a hunch that Dudley is going to be taking the 'draco role' in the new year.

red

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 7:53am

Just finished the whole story - excellent! I loved the whole thing.

Lots of funny stuff
(Harry: Don't prank Padfoot.
Sirius: Right, don't prank Padfoot.
Harry: It's too easy
Sirius: right...huh?)

Lots of love, and danger.

Those poems were good. Sometimes I could make out what they were saying, sometimes not.

Excellent original characters, especially Danger, but all the minor ones, too.

Thank you so much for writing. It gave me a lot of enjoyment. And I'm looking forward to the story of Hogwarts.

Tom A.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 4:36am

All plot threads woven tightly together, with just a taste of foreshadowing the sequel. Nicely done. I have enjoyed this as I have few others. I look forward to the sequels, and I know that I'll read this again -- likely more than once.

Thanks for the gift of this story to all of us.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 1:59am

I was afraid that Umbridge was going to show up sooner rather than later. I suppose she was the one who sent the Dementer to Sirius earlier?

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 1:36am

This is a very nice strech of chapters. I especially like the effect on Ron of having new friends live close by. I like your take on Ron very much. By now we know that Hermione is slightly older than Ron and Harry, but your having her younger than the Hogwarts cut-off was nicely finessed and not a distraction.

You are creating a wonderfully detailed home life for Harry and the Pack that is a welcome alternative to Canon.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 9:28pm

I hate having to go to work; I'd rather read the next chapter. But I wouldn't stop there, so I'd better stop here.

Snape was never stupid, unfortunately. I see that the Pack will soon be living near Ottery St Catchpole. I suppose that'll be good for Ron. Thanks again for sharing this with us.