Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 4:10pm

I'm re-reading this and really enjoying it. Obviously the dreams make a lot more sense with hindsight. Which also means I appreciate the effort you put into them more. :-) Thanks!

OrionHR posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 3:12am

Severus=grumpy... dude, that's beautiful. I want you to understand your story is very dangerous. Simply because it's nigh impossible to stop reading it.

I can't think of anything to truly critique you about. Your beta does good work, and you've impressed Jeconais enough to be included in this very elite club.

Keep up the good work.

WWIIIKitten posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 5:31pm

Finally got around to reading this one and I must say, I'm kicking myself for not doing it sooner.

Ofcourse, now I'm kicking myself for finishing it. There's no more to read! Bwaaaaaaaa!!! *cries pathetically*

Extremely well-written. In fact, you're in my top 3 of authors right now. Well above JKR.

And on that note, thank you very much for writing this, thank you again for sharing it and thank you for reading my review. ;-)

Terry Chang posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 3:27pm

i'm glad you've come to this site as now i don't have to frequent several sites in order to read my favorite stories. Thank you!!!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 3:23pm

Final - - I am delighted that Neville is joining the pack.

Please tell me there is a sequel that will start posting soon.

Looking for a new story to read by reading reviews?

Look no further - - start reading this one - you'll thank me.

Thanks for such a marvelous tale!

Anne B. Walsh replied:

There is a sequel that is now posted, and another one that I'll be posting soon. Thank you, for reviewing every single chapter - you made my day!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 3:03pm

Ch.49 - - Snape deserves all you give him through this bunch.

Such a great tale!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 2:48pm

Ch.48 - - So very heartwarming at the end.

Peter's trial was terrific. Too bad Umbridge and Fudge can't join him.

The Rita Skeeter bit was delicious.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 2:29pm

Ch.47 - - Ron's insecurity breaks my heart, but it is so canon by observation. But Harry is Harry, and the rest of the gang follows the alpha's lead - very willingly here.

What a delightful chapter!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 2:10pm

Ch.46 - - This is really grand. What a happy chapter. I love it when a plan comes together.

Such a delight to read through, but Severus needs to be chasitsed by Dumbledore.

Thrilling!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 1:53pm

Ch.45 - - Hope springs eternal, and the good guys win.

And Snape has a nasty cut on his neck.

Dumbledore needs to put Snape in his place for not being helpful.

Can't wait!!!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 1:15pm

Ch.44 - - Half of a happy ending so far. I cannot wait until the second alpha leader pulls his part of the solution of the ages.

Such a fine read!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 1:00pm

Ch.43 - - I had to slow myself in reading this - it is so enthralling.

Great dramatics and compelling dialogue.

Terrific, again I say terrific!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 12:37pm

Ch.42 - - This is griping. I must rush to the next chapter.

But I have to say just how fine this story is. Just very fine.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 10:56am

Ch.41 - - The excitement. This is an impressive piece.

Draco and Luna is usually farcical, but I want only the best for her after her loyalty in OotP, and her poor treatment in HBP. It took AU, your AU, to create the best Draco/Luna scenario I've read.

Great work. Brilliant dialogue.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 10:14am

Ch.40 - - Desperate times and drastic measures to do what has to be done.

This is a gut wrenching moment you've created here.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 8:50am

Ch.39 - - I feel like a great moment in time is coming together. Forces of the universe are coalesing in a great story's end.

And eight year old Meghan makes the right decision all by herself.

Exciting.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 7:27am

Ch.38 - - This is an excellent chapter.

But you wrote too good of a cliffie for me to write more in a review.

Terrific.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 7:01am

Ch.37 - - Please let this so back fire on Umbridge and Fudge as to be a comic and poetic bedtime story of what can go wrong when you are unscrupulously ambitious and stupidly loyal to a spineless moron.

The clever bedtime story Nott told his son - making canon Harry's story a fear producing tale used to keep Purebloods in line - how delicious.

Great work.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 6:15am

Ch.36 - - I hope we get Peter caught and everything cleared up before Hogwarts.

The dancing was interesting. Hermione and Ron going 'eww' and apologizing in a matter of seconds was finely done.

Terrific stuff.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 4:49am

Ch.35 - - This is all just fiction, but it is hard not to want all of this for Hermione, Harry, Ron, Ginny, Luna, and Draco.

Even the twins would be better because of this. Percy too.

A great tale all around.